12 Days of Dark Angel - Day 2 - "All is calm, All is Bright"

[ladyarcherfan3]

Title: “All is Calm, All is Bright”
Author: ladyarcherfan3
Rating: PG-13 for dark images
Disclaimer: I own nothing, but the muse owns me
Summary: Ben, lost and alone, seeks the help of the Blue Lady. And finds his answer.
Notes: Here I was, wanting to write a winter / Christmas story for Dark Angel, and then Ben and his Blue Lady and this song conspired and

Comments

[peaceful_sands]

Creepy and very very effective. Well-written, thanks for sharing.

[redheadforever]

Perfectly nerds most to keep the feeling steady.

Thank you!

[redheadforever]

WTF Windows Phone?

My original comment was "Perfectly in character. Sometimes the most effective story skips a scene to keep the feeling steady.

Thank you!"

The only nerds were in Microsoft's imagination.

[ladyarcherfan3]

Haha, I was wondering what autocorrect was playing at there! Thanks!

[mdlaw]

This is such a clear picture of how damaged Ben was. m. :)

[ladyarcherfan3]

Thanks! :)

[anonymous]

A good one.. Really how Ben would have been..

[ladyarcherfan3]

Thanks. :)

[randomstasis]

Wow, lovely word pictures of Ben and his sparse interior landscape; such fear and need and desperation winding through the beauty around him.

[ladyarcherfan3]

Thank you!

[d8rkmessngr]

Oh, oh, Ben. Writer, you broke my heart with this one! His pleaing to the Lady made my eyes tear. Beautiful, haunting angst! Thank you for posting this!