Miserable Max on the Space Needle

[geeky_apple]

For a moment she thought Ben was back, calling her name from somewhere behind her back. The worried voice was that of the sweetly caring brother of her childhood, free of the insane obsession characterizing their last encounters. Seeing him sight of him standing there, his tall, handsome appearance triggering surreal memories of Ben’s boyishly

Comments

[grievingmess]

I already left a review at Ffnet (I think, brain too muddled) but this is so good it deserves another !

Sad, and powerful and all coming together with the 2 differnt POVs ... Capturing Max's sudden burden and hectic life after Manticore and making her bitter about it, perfectly written.

ANd I remember now that I DID leave a review because I just came across that fav. line of mine, and remembered that after submitting it on ffnet, read that Lisa had the same fav. line too heh heh

thanks for this!

[geeky_apple]

Thank you, especially for a double-review in exam time:-)

[mrsevilpigeon]

I love this story just as much here as I do at the ther site, so I'm leaving another thank you. :-)

[geeky_apple]

Glad you like it (and like it here too despite my inability to master a proper LJ post)