OOC: Concrit, Relationships, Plotting
What do you think about my Beyond Birthday? Are there things I should change? Please post your opinion here. By the way: The Beyond Birthday I play is bissexual.
Relationships (Red means that those characters have been dropped):
Center of his love and hate: L
Loves: Cissnei
Love Intrest: Soujiro, Tamaki
Objects of faszination (might develope to Love Intrest): Kaito
Friends: Charmy, Kenta, Kuro, Gon, Konata, Aya, Hiiro, Yuna
Likes: Willy, Mariya
Neutral: Killua, Yuki
Dislikes: Hawke, Danny
Hates: Light
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Cissnei is very important to Beyond, not matter wether he wants that or not. She's most likely his most important person after L. Right now, he's in his "I don't need people"-mood again and tries to deny his feelings. Fact is he needs Cissnei and he really wants to understand her. It hurts if she doesn't really talk to him and denies to show her weakness to him. It is actually very easy for her to start a fight with him, just because it's so easy for her to hurt him. Somewhere in his mind he knows, that he may be in love, but he isn't able to confess that to himself. Love hurts, he know that, and he is afraid to give his heart away...
Tamaki will always be the cutest person Beyond ever talked to. No matter who B will end up with, it's very unlikely that he will ever feel that much attraction for someone. Watching Tamaki makes B feel relaxed in a way he did only know from reading cute manga in the past. Tamaki seems to life in another world and allows B to life in it too at least for a bit. So Beyond really hopes that he'll spent much time with Tamaki in the future.
Charmy Charmy just offered Beyond to life with him and that suprised the Jam-Lover. Charmy first looked a bit stupid to Beyond, but he started to like him, because Charmy said he would search jam with him and ... even plant strawberries. What Charmy says sounds often weird to Beyond. The Bee's cuteness is kind of wasted with Beyond. For someone who was always alone, getting along with Charmy is awkward.
Mariya Beyond thinks Mariya is very... intresting. The crossdressing boy caught his attention, because he wasn't one of all the "nice" poeple here. Mariya tried to use Beyond, but he failed, because Beyond easily looked through his plans. Beyond likes the idea of crossdressing. Mariya looks very attractive to him, because of his character too. But he wouldn't trust him. Beyond knows he has to b carefull if Mariya is arround. But on the other hand they get along very well.
L . The one person Beyond hates with all his heart. He thinks he is the copy of L. He hates to know that L is better. All he ever wanted was to defeat L and die. Now that L arrived in Ads his hate has grown even bigger. L gave him stupid nicknames and told him what's going to happen to him. B felt totaly helpless, but then he got L's name and feels much better now. Beyond tries to tell himself, he doesn't want to be like L, but that's a complete lie. He's totaly jealous of this man.
Right now L is getting more and more human to him. He even brought out B's real laughter. They're working together because of Light and Beyond really has to overthink his hate for L. This is confusing to him.
Kenta became one of B's best friends. He completly trusts him, even if he often has to worry about the boy. Kenta was the first person who ever knew about his eyes. Beyond has hurt him once and he does not want to do that ever again. Kenta always sees the good inside of B and B is slightly annoyed by that but on the other hand thinks that's cute. He wouldn't say so, but living without Kenta would be difficult for him now.
Kuro confuses B a lot and leaves him a bit helpless. As they met first Kuro seemed strong and wild and he was not nice to B. But Beyond kinda liked that, because he gets sick of friendlyness slowly. Then Kuro's weaker side showed up. B was totally helpless saying all the cheer-up-things he ever heard of. And then he just surrendered and said his own opinion. He doesn't know how this happened but he came to promise Kuro he won't leave. Promises, real promises, do mean something to Beyond and he hopes he will keep it. He likes Kuro a lot, since he seems to has no problem with him being a killer.
Light is a person B is ... jealous of. Light has L's attention, is perhaps a better criminal... Light has taken Beyond's place in the world. In L's world which is far more cruel. When his thoughts come to Light Yagami B is full of pure hate. He probably never hated that much. Light is -of course- far from being as important as L to B, but when it comes to L Beyond also feels some good things about him. Nothing like that with Light. Beyond wants to see him soaked in blood, laying on the floor... We don't need to describe it more, do we? Plus Light will kill/has killed Beyond and B knows that. Light made the suicidal Beyond Birthday fear death for the first time.
Soujiro is one of the persons B is attracted to. He likes how Soujiro looks. AND he likes how he acts. His smile is annoying and cute to B at once. He does want to make out with the boy more, but right now his feelings do not go deeper
Hiiro is one of the few friends left to B. He used to think of him as slightly annoying, when they first met. Intelligent, but so innocent, so stupid, that he helps a stranger. Beyond can't understand why Hiiro cares for him. But (even though he'd never admitt it) Beyond likes being taken care of.
Beyond is really thankful for Hiiro being there, since Hiiro saved him so often now. He is afraid of dying here in Adstring and loosing the eyes, so for the first time he really thinks he owes someone something. For the first time Beyond really wants to make it up to someone. He only has now idea how to do so.
As long as it doesn't get in the way of his own plans (he rarely has any right now), he'll try to help Hiiro with whatever someone can help with. In B's mind the excuse for this is "I need to distract myself", but it is only an excuse and he knows so.
If he ever had to kill Hiiro, B would surely feel very guilty for it. (And that is good, because B'd kill most of the people he is friendly with without mourning it overly much, as long as it guides him to reach his goal. Hiiro is rather high in the "most-important-ranking".)
Relationships (Red means that those characters have been dropped):
Center of his love and hate: L
Loves: Cissnei
Love Intrest: Soujiro, Tamaki
Objects of faszination (might develope to Love Intrest): Kaito
Friends: Charmy, Kenta, Kuro, Gon, Konata, Aya, Hiiro, Yuna
Likes: Willy, Mariya
Neutral: Killua, Yuki
Dislikes: Hawke, Danny
Hates: Light
If you're character is not listed yet (or has no long text), but you want him to, please leave a message
Cissnei is very important to Beyond, not matter wether he wants that or not. She's most likely his most important person after L. Right now, he's in his "I don't need people"-mood again and tries to deny his feelings. Fact is he needs Cissnei and he really wants to understand her. It hurts if she doesn't really talk to him and denies to show her weakness to him. It is actually very easy for her to start a fight with him, just because it's so easy for her to hurt him. Somewhere in his mind he knows, that he may be in love, but he isn't able to confess that to himself. Love hurts, he know that, and he is afraid to give his heart away...
Tamaki will always be the cutest person Beyond ever talked to. No matter who B will end up with, it's very unlikely that he will ever feel that much attraction for someone. Watching Tamaki makes B feel relaxed in a way he did only know from reading cute manga in the past. Tamaki seems to life in another world and allows B to life in it too at least for a bit. So Beyond really hopes that he'll spent much time with Tamaki in the future.
Charmy Charmy just offered Beyond to life with him and that suprised the Jam-Lover. Charmy first looked a bit stupid to Beyond, but he started to like him, because Charmy said he would search jam with him and ... even plant strawberries. What Charmy says sounds often weird to Beyond. The Bee's cuteness is kind of wasted with Beyond. For someone who was always alone, getting along with Charmy is awkward.
Mariya Beyond thinks Mariya is very... intresting. The crossdressing boy caught his attention, because he wasn't one of all the "nice" poeple here. Mariya tried to use Beyond, but he failed, because Beyond easily looked through his plans. Beyond likes the idea of crossdressing. Mariya looks very attractive to him, because of his character too. But he wouldn't trust him. Beyond knows he has to b carefull if Mariya is arround. But on the other hand they get along very well.
L . The one person Beyond hates with all his heart. He thinks he is the copy of L. He hates to know that L is better. All he ever wanted was to defeat L and die. Now that L arrived in Ads his hate has grown even bigger. L gave him stupid nicknames and told him what's going to happen to him. B felt totaly helpless, but then he got L's name and feels much better now. Beyond tries to tell himself, he doesn't want to be like L, but that's a complete lie. He's totaly jealous of this man.
Right now L is getting more and more human to him. He even brought out B's real laughter. They're working together because of Light and Beyond really has to overthink his hate for L. This is confusing to him.
Kenta became one of B's best friends. He completly trusts him, even if he often has to worry about the boy. Kenta was the first person who ever knew about his eyes. Beyond has hurt him once and he does not want to do that ever again. Kenta always sees the good inside of B and B is slightly annoyed by that but on the other hand thinks that's cute. He wouldn't say so, but living without Kenta would be difficult for him now.
Kuro confuses B a lot and leaves him a bit helpless. As they met first Kuro seemed strong and wild and he was not nice to B. But Beyond kinda liked that, because he gets sick of friendlyness slowly. Then Kuro's weaker side showed up. B was totally helpless saying all the cheer-up-things he ever heard of. And then he just surrendered and said his own opinion. He doesn't know how this happened but he came to promise Kuro he won't leave. Promises, real promises, do mean something to Beyond and he hopes he will keep it. He likes Kuro a lot, since he seems to has no problem with him being a killer.
Light is a person B is ... jealous of. Light has L's attention, is perhaps a better criminal... Light has taken Beyond's place in the world. In L's world which is far more cruel. When his thoughts come to Light Yagami B is full of pure hate. He probably never hated that much. Light is -of course- far from being as important as L to B, but when it comes to L Beyond also feels some good things about him. Nothing like that with Light. Beyond wants to see him soaked in blood, laying on the floor... We don't need to describe it more, do we? Plus Light will kill/has killed Beyond and B knows that. Light made the suicidal Beyond Birthday fear death for the first time.
Soujiro is one of the persons B is attracted to. He likes how Soujiro looks. AND he likes how he acts. His smile is annoying and cute to B at once. He does want to make out with the boy more, but right now his feelings do not go deeper
Hiiro is one of the few friends left to B. He used to think of him as slightly annoying, when they first met. Intelligent, but so innocent, so stupid, that he helps a stranger. Beyond can't understand why Hiiro cares for him. But (even though he'd never admitt it) Beyond likes being taken care of.
Beyond is really thankful for Hiiro being there, since Hiiro saved him so often now. He is afraid of dying here in Adstring and loosing the eyes, so for the first time he really thinks he owes someone something. For the first time Beyond really wants to make it up to someone. He only has now idea how to do so.
As long as it doesn't get in the way of his own plans (he rarely has any right now), he'll try to help Hiiro with whatever someone can help with. In B's mind the excuse for this is "I need to distract myself", but it is only an excuse and he knows so.
If he ever had to kill Hiiro, B would surely feel very guilty for it. (And that is good, because B'd kill most of the people he is friendly with without mourning it overly much, as long as it guides him to reach his goal. Hiiro is rather high in the "most-important-ranking".)