Concrit please!

[jale_bait]

I'm preeetty new at this, so I would love concrit, good or bad, no matter how trivial. I'd appreciate anything at all, even if it's just a simple "you're decent" or a "go get lost in a maze lined with knives"... I take all criticism to heart

Comments

[jale_bait]

Th-thanks. D: Sometimes I wonder about how I play him since you only ever see him in the game as Sieg, whom I'm sure he would be more open toward since they're childhood friends and all.

Only slightly? I think I can fix that!!

[wontknowtilitry]

"Only slightly? I think I can fix that!!"

fafjaldjanhlng-wait, wha-!?

*coughs*

ANYWHO. I think you're a great Jale. I hope I haven't been too annoying. 8D;;

[jale_bait]

I've seen annoyinger You kidding? If anything, I should be annoying you. I try not to have Jale jump Sieg at every opportunity, but when his entire character seems to revolve around watching out for Sieg I can't convince myself that Jale doesn't glitter rainbow shoujo sparkles every time Sieg comes within eyeshot (or would that be earshot).

With that said

Is Sieg moving into the tent? :P

And thanks a lot! I really appreciate it. :D;;

[cmdr_cecile]

((I haven't had much of a chance to interact with Jale, nor am I as familiar with Tierkreis but thus far your portrayal of Jale is really nice and balanced. I wish I could give more feedback, but I'll keep my eyes open!))

[jale_bait]

True, Cecile and Jale haven't talked much... at all. But hey, you know they share the same star? It kinda cracks me up.

Thanks for taking the time to comment! :O