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FIC: Crossed Jurisdictions, Part 6

Jun 26, 2008 21:42

Title: Crossed Jurisdictions, Part 6
Author: Jalabert
Category: Crossover (CSI:NY, Criminal Minds)
Summary: When a serial killer brings the BAU team to New York, an old acquaintance is renewed and a new relationship emerges.

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derek morgan, don flack, criminal minds, csi:ny, spencer reid, sheldon hawkes, crossover, crossed jurisdictions

Comments 3

anonymous June 27 2008, 02:43:02 UTC

Yay! Another great update, and I'm excited to see it so soon!
I'm still sitting here trying to put the mystery together and
enjoying all the criss-crossed relationships going on. Keep up
the good work, this is a really intriguing story and you write
it realistically enough to have it be a real case. I'm impressed!

mulder200 June 27 2008, 03:47:02 UTC

It's nice to see another update from you. It's always nice to see the care the care ans upport Don and Derek are giving their two men. I know Derek said earlier this was just a fling but actions speak louder than words.

According to our forensic specialists, three were three people present at the crime.

I believe you meant to put "there" instead of "three".
I look forward to the next part.

Crossed Jurisdictions pt6 trixxanna December 3 2008, 10:33:38 UTC

*incomprehensible squeeing and flailing*
I'm loving this more and more with every passing sentence. I'm so wrapped up in the story and case that I can't even think of proper praise.

After reading the opening sentence to this chapter I just knew that at least one of our geniuses would be injured but I didn't think of Derek's jealously coming into play. Being jealous of Hotch's interest shows that his thoughts are clouded by emotions. Yes, he knows that Hotch is who Spencer really wanted when it began but back then it was just physical, now, he's begun on that fall ( ... )