Fic: Come Raise Your Flag Upon Me (Jon/Sansa, R)

[jal80]

Title: Come Raise Your Flag Upon Me
Fandom: ASoIaF
Pairing: Jon/Sansa
Rating: Softish R
Disclaimer: So very not mine.
Notes: Written for the Kink Meme (obviously since apparently my new purpose in life is filling a bunch of Jon/Sansa prompts!) Prompt: "Possessive Sansa, basically. Sugestion: she didn't like the way the other ladies were looking at her

Comments

[honey_wheeler]

Blerrrrrgh, this makes me all flappy-hands, ack! SHE GETS HAUGHTY WHEN SHE'S ANGRY AND HE KNOWS IT, my heart, ugh.

[jal80]

Hee!! So glad you liked! I get all flappy-hands over your fics, too! It is a MUTUAL FLAPPY-HANDS SOCIETY. ;)

And yes, Haughty Sansa is Angry Sansa. I think Jon secretly likes it.

[midnightblack07]

GAAH I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS!!

I love that Jon knows her well enough to know that she gets haughty when she's angry, and the way you incorporated Mya, and how FIERCE Sansa got (and how much Jon loved it hehe(--just I LOVE THE WAY YOUR WRITE THESE TWO AND IF THERE WAS ANY WAY I COULD GET YOU TO DO SO FOREVER I WOULD <333

[jal80]

YAY!! Thank you, m'dear!! And I see no danger of me stopping Jon/Sansa fics any time soon because OMG ALL THE PROMPTS. I really need to tackle some Jon/Jeyne, too. Didn't you have a prompt involving them and the the hot pools? Hmmm....

[midnightblack07]

*squeals* :O

If you fill another one of my prompts (or any Jon/Sansa, or Jon/Jeyne, or ANYONE YOU CHOOSE REALLY prompts) I just--there will be NO WORDS <3333

[nomdeplumejam]

OMG. YOU'RE BECOMING MY FAVE AUTHOR OF JON/SANSA NOW.

I really really adore how you write them! It's as if I could almost see them in front of me doing all just that :)))

[jal80]

Oh, thank you!! What a fab compliment! :D

[just_a_dram]

I just adore this. I love that it is a glimpse of them as a really established married couple, and that for all the things that might trouble them, you can tell they're really happy with each other and with life.

Jon's approach with Sansa when they're alone feels very right. You've done a wonderful job shaping him here, and how he might deal with Sansa.

I like that there are bits and pieces of their other lives that find there way into this too. Mentions of Dany, Mya being present. That really grounds the fic in a meaningful way.

It's also incredibly hot. You manage to get both aspects in there--that Jon is exceedingly careful with her and that he's a bit rough and passionate--which is pretty nifty work. ;)

Lovely, lovely work, as usual.

[jal80]

Oh, wow! What a lovely, thoughtful comment. Thank you so much!! I have to say, it was really fun writing them as an established couple for the first time. I definitely wanted to show that they're happy despite all the other crap surrounding them, so I'm so glad that bit worked for you! XOXO!!

[pennylane_4]

I keep trying to think of a coherent way to express my feelings, but all I'm able to achieve so far are unintelligible noises of happiness. A verbal keysmash, if you will.

Just, guh. Jealous Sansa. Shirtless Jon (srsly, thank you for that mental image). Every single thing about Mya. Jon knowing Sansa well enough to realize she gets haughty when she's angry... and liking it. Jon being amused by her jealousy. Sansa reflecting that one doesn't often get soft words from Jon because omg yes that's exactly how it would be with Jon wouldn't it? Sansa gulping down her cup of wine AND his cup of wine. Her territorial cry of "Mine." Jon being turned on by it. And the sex, guh the rough intense sex. Unf

[jal80]

Oh, this is so nice!! Thank you very much!! It was fun to write a alightly more light-hearted fic for them (poor kids DESERVE IT, haha!) I would love to write more of this 'verse (and hopefully more with Mya since she ended up being a surprisingly fun addition. Sansa needs girlfriends!)

Again, thank you so much for reading and for leaving such an awesome comment! Really appreciated!