Kanjani8: "Promises" (Ryo/Uchi)

[jain]

Title: Promises
Author: Jain
Pairing: Ryo/Uchi
Rating: G
Word count: 1583
Summary: It's been years since Uchi's gotten homemade chocolates.
Author's notes: Written for the 24 Hour Valentine's Day Challenge.

Other participants: acchikocchi | agirlcalledkil | anamuan | devetir | honooko | imwahyou | iverin | jackoweskla | jadedfrenzy | jnessap |

Comments

[pashoshi]

This is so adorable. The beginning with Uchi and his mother complex was really sweet, and the flailing over getting a confession from Yasu and not from Ryo was well done, and then the end just made me smile a lot. It makes me so happy to read good Ryo/Uchi.

[jain]

Thank you so much! I'm especially glad that you liked the bit with Uchi and his mother; I didn't want to ignore the fact that they're unusually close, but I didn't want to turn it into a joke the way most stories do. It's really great to hear that it worked for you.

[samenashi]

this made me so insanely happy.

[jain]

I'm glad you enjoyed! Thanks for commenting.

[katherinekate]

That was just the sweetest best thing a girl can read first thing in the morning. It was amazing. Not overwritten just beautiful. Thank you, you are fantastic, that was fantastic, RyoUchi deserves lots of fantastics, thank you!!

[jain]

Thank you for the lovely comment! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story.

[impynymph]

This is so adorable!

It is really great to read good Ryo/Uchi you'll write more sometime, right?? please?!

"What I put you through?" Uchi said, as indignantly as he could while he was still laughing. "You made me think that I was going to have to turn down Yasu! You had it easy in comparison."

SDFKJLSADA AHAHahahahaa so great XD

[jain]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked that paragraph in particular; I really enjoyed writing that bit. And I hope to write more Ryo/Uchi at some point, though I have a few stories for other pairings that I'm trying to finish first.

[jecca_o9]

hi, i'm speechles. have hearts instead, ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

the background for the chocolates was wonderful and oh so possible, and then Uchi's thoughts on having to reject Yassu, and then the phone call, and alk;dfkalsdf;aklsdfal;k. (there goes my attempts to be coherent, i'll stick with the hearts next time XDDDD)

[jain]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you found the premise plausible. The part where Uchi was worrying about how to turn down Yasu was actually really hard to write, since I love the idea of the two of them together, so it's great to hear that it worked for you.