w-inds.: "What Do You Hear in These Sounds?" (Ryohei/Keita/Ryuichi)

[jain]

Title: What Do You Hear in These Sounds?
Author: Jain
Pairing: Ryohei/Keita/Ryuichi
Rating: R
Word count: 1740
Summary: Too much is left unspoken for Keita's comfort.
Author's notes: Remix of Sounds Like by mousapelli for remixredux09.

Comments

[kisetsu_no_sora]

wow i really liked the take on keita here...and the sudden resolution fit perfectly ^^

"...and Keita placed one hand carefully in Ryuichi's hair, lifted the other to cup Ryohei's cheek, and held on to them both."

^ i think that line really accented what keita had been trying to reach all along, since he had started drifiting away from his two bandmates at the start of the fic. wonderfully beautiful job! :D

[jain]

Thank you so much for the lovely comment! That's exactly what I was aiming for with the last line; it's great to hear that it worked for you.

[ruegge]

*3*
Lovely!

[jain]

Thank you!

[uminohikari]

Awww, Keita ;; I really liked how the prose seemed to reflect his state of tiredness. ♥

[jain]

Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.