Comments | jailynn24: Fiction: The Middle (Ethan and Kristina- General Hospital)

jailynn24

Fiction: The Middle (Ethan and Kristina- General Hospital)

Aug 19, 2011 14:51

fic: the middle, one shot, rating: pg, gh, general hospital, ethan/kristina, kristina/ethan

Comments 13

angelzqq August 20 2011, 22:13:25 UTC

Oh my freakin gosh!!!! First...thank you sissy, love you too! Second, I don't know what a beta is but you don't need it, lol. Whatever was blocking you certainly didn't remain a problem. This was sooooo freakin good!!!! Why can't they write them like you?? I could squeeeeeeeeeee and you know I don't do that very often. I wasn't really sure where you would go with them because I know Kristina gets on your nerves but you wrote her exactly like I'd like her to be. Thank you so much for this. I won't be greedy (even though I want to, lol) and ask for more but if you happen to find yourself wanting to write any more one shots for them, you would have a more than eager reader who loves you bunches and it wouldn't hurt my feelings *grins*. *HUGE HUGS AND LOVE*

Twinnie

jailynn24 August 24 2011, 02:43:11 UTC

I'm so relieved you liked the story. Honestly I started this fiction five times in the course of three days, each time I got more and more frustrated because I just couldn't seem to get a solid idea to form. I still can't believe I actually finished this one. *laughing* I'd love to write more (of anything actually) but time has been such an issue. Last week I had a decent amount of time off, but this week... nothing. *laughing* At least the paycheck will be nice to look at at the end. *wink*

Oh and a beta is like a fan fiction editor. It's a person that looks over a story/chapter/whatever and gives tips on grammar, story structure, spelling and offers encouragement. I haven't had one in a while, in fact Adam was my beta for a long time. I would send him the chapters and he would edit them before I posted. *laughing*

Love you lots, Twinnie.

Sissy

angelzqq August 21 2011, 00:27:04 UTC

Yep...reading it again and damn. Even hot at PG. I'm a happy girl *grins*.

jailynn24 August 24 2011, 02:44:22 UTC

*laughing* You make me laugh. But that's one of the reasons you are my Twinnie. *hugs*

anonymous August 27 2011, 03:08:17 UTC

GREAT job!

jailynn24 August 29 2011, 23:12:55 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it

THe Middle ghfan060 September 1 2011, 04:48:42 UTC

I loved it! Just loved the way Ethan just gave in to Kristina, and is ready to face his feelings and be with her.

I sure hope you will write some more Ethina fics.

Re: THe Middle angelzqq September 3 2011, 18:37:20 UTC

Yayyyyy you like it too. I tell her that all the time. I'm hoping enough people will bug her enough about writing more that she'll do it, lol. So please have all the Ethina fans you know come visit and read her one shot and tell her how awesome it is *grins*.

Re: THe Middle jailynn24 September 4 2011, 13:07:06 UTC

*laughing* You are so bad Twinnie. But I'm so glad you liked it enough to want more. **hugs**

Re: THe Middle jailynn24 September 4 2011, 13:05:53 UTC

Thank you! I'm so happy you liked it. :) I'll definitely try and write more for this couple some time soon. Thanks again for commenting.

haydeertz September 4 2011, 03:09:39 UTC

Wow!!! What a great Ethina fic!!! I hope you continue to write more..they are by far my fav couple in the making right now on GH and I am completely hooked by them...ur writing just makes me fall a lil bit more in love with these fictional characters....cant wait till u get inspired again...hope its real soon!!!! =P

jailynn24 September 4 2011, 13:08:49 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm thrilled you enjoyed the story so much. I'll definitely try and write more for this couple soon. Thanks again for taking the time to comment. I can't tell you how much that means to me. *g*