Fic: high school love line and the rumors that follow [Puck/Lauren, Glee]

May 04, 2011 19:30


I really hoped this would be the last chapter, but I have a little weird quirk... I can't end on an uneven number. LOL I know, I know I'm a wack-a-doodle. I really hope you like this chapter. It took much longer than I thought it would. The next chapter is the last one. I want to thank you all for reading this story. Please let me know what you ( Read more... )

quinn, brittany, puck/lauren, artie, tina, puck, finn, lauren, blaine, rachel, mercedes, sam, kurt, glee, luck, mike, finn/quinn, santana, fiction, fic: high school love line and the rumor

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puppyloveclub May 5 2011, 04:47:32 UTC
love it! CAN'T WAIT for the last chapter!

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jailynn24 May 11 2011, 17:33:38 UTC
Oh I hope you like it. Thanks for the review!

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escritoireazul May 5 2011, 06:37:53 UTC
“It's important,” Tina responded as she moved closer to her. Lauren smiled at the girl's dress. It had a purple corset top with black ribbing and folds of purple and black fabric that reached the floor. Her pointed toe lace up, high heeled boots peeked out when she walked. “Because we're all wearing one,” she held up her wrist to show off hers- the others followed suit. “It's a Glee bonding thing.”

“I'm not in Glee anymore,” Lauren said, trying to ignore the slightly punch of pain that hit her in her gut.

“You're still one of us, though,” Blaine said softly.

I'M NOT CRYING IT IS JUST RAINING INSIDE. YEAH, RAINING INSIDE THE HOUSE. IT HAPPENS, OKAY. DAMN IT.

Wordlessly, she held out her hand, palm up and waited for the cool chain to land in the center. Instead she felt it being placed around her wrist. Looking at Quinn, her friend grinned at her. They shared a silent moment, a quick conversation; done with eyes, and then it was gone.RAINING GODDAMN IT RAINING ( ... )

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jailynn24 May 11 2011, 18:15:02 UTC
*grabs umbrella* Sorry about the rain! ;-)

Every episode I watch for Quinn and Lauren to be best friends, because of how much I've written them as such and each week they don't interact... so disappointing. LOL

I want Mercedes to have a guy or at least the possibility of having a guy on the show, since the writers refuse to give her one... enter Chuck. I just love the idea of Lauren urging them along.

I really hope you like the answers I give in the next chapter. *bites nails nervously*

Lauren and Puck would have been epic as queen and king of prom! I had to give that in my story although I actually wrote it different ways before settling on this one.

Thanks for the feedback! Hope you like the next chapter!

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drd2 May 5 2011, 09:19:57 UTC
LOVE THIS!!! Love the whole thing from the first chapter to this chapter! I almost don't want it to end.

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jailynn24 May 11 2011, 18:16:08 UTC
Aw thanks! I'm so thrilled you've enjoyed the story so far. :) I really hope you like the next chapter as well.

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venustus May 5 2011, 19:07:47 UTC
So many questions! You are such a tease!
How did Puck help Artie?
What was the back alley hook-up?
OMG, WHAT WAS THE DAMNED CHARM??

Okay, maybe I am a bit too invested in this story. :) I am so excited for the next chapter (but sad that it's the end).

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jailynn24 May 11 2011, 18:51:48 UTC
All will be revealed in the last chapter. LOL I just hope it doesn't disappoint when you read it.

Puck helped Artie on the show when Brittany, Santana, Puck, and Artie went on that double date. I was lazy and actually referenced the show instead of making something up. LOL
-The alley hook-up was... you'll find out. ;)
-Now the charm is the one part I really hope isn't a let down. *bites nails*

Thanks for the comment love. It means the world to me!

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lovergirl933 May 6 2011, 00:56:42 UTC
I swear, with every chapter you write, I fall more in love with your characterizations of Puck and Lauren and with your writing!

This was so great!! The charm bit was one of my favorite parts, but I want to know what it is already. And their King/Queen dance was just so heartbreaking to read, especially the end.

Gah, I can't until the final chapter...but where am I going to go for my Luck fix after this fic ends? D:

Also, I linked my serious RP's tumblr account to in a reply that you left on my comment on chapter 10. Let me know what you think if you do go over there and check it out!

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jailynn24 May 11 2011, 19:28:03 UTC
Aw *blushes* Thanks! I'm glad that Lauren and Puck feel real to you and you're enjoying the way I'm writing them. ;)

I have really played around with the charm in my head for a while. I want it to be worth the wait. Hopefully it will be. The king and queen dance was my favorite part to write because of the undercurrent of emotions.

Well I do have another story already started. I hope you'll enjoy that one as well *bites nails*

I checked it out. It's so cool. How do you keep up with everything? LOL I'd be so lost.

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lovergirl933 May 11 2011, 19:35:15 UTC
I'm like replying to all your replies right now and I just finished chapter 12 and I can't even fully explain just how much I love Luck and your writing.

I'm actually a part of about 8 different RPs on Tumblr right now and I play Lauren/Ashley Fink in all of them. It's a bit confusing sometimes, but I totally love it. It's also so awesome to get the chance to RP some crackships of mine, like Lauren/Artie. :D

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