Comments | jailynn24: Fic: high school love line and the rumors that follow [Puck/Lauren, Glee]

jailynn24

Fic: high school love line and the rumors that follow [Puck/Lauren, Glee]

Apr 04, 2011 07:57

So this is a very long chapter that I'm not happy with at all. I tried to figure out why and all I can come up with is that the writing sucks! No matter how hard I tried to fix what I think is broken with it, I couldn't. In fact the more I attempted to, the more I believed I messed it up. I'm so sorry for the sub-par work. It was never my intention ( Read more... )

quinn, brittany, artie, tina, puck, finn, lauren, rachel, mercedes, glee, luck, mike, santana, fiction, will, fic: high school love line and the rumor

Comments 12

venustus April 4 2011, 16:32:21 UTC

Okay, you are not allowed to beat yourself up! That was an excellent chapter! Writing pain is so different from writing happy, I think it makes the author feel totally different too. I totally love this story and I am constantly checking back here for new chapters! :)

jailynn24 April 21 2011, 15:22:18 UTC

**hugs** Thanks! I'm so happy that you liked the chapter. I think I stare at my writing so long that by the time I post it, I'm ready to scream. LOL

Now I need to go read your last two chapters. I can't believe I'm so far behind... *rushes off*

eertyecal April 4 2011, 21:01:23 UTC

I just wrote a rather lengthy reply and lost it! Arrggh! The angst makes the sweet sweeter. I don't think that line is new to you about your writing. Not from me anyway. I think it's alot easier to write the fluff, the happiness. It's more difficult to write the angst, the insecurities, the self-doubt, because you really have to get inside that person. You have the ability to do that so well. In the process of getting inside a person, you are able to find a bit of yourself as well. I think that's why you see her so well. There is alot in this chapter that reminds me of me too. I find myself wanting to be best friends with Lauren. She has spent a alot of years perfecting the skill of building walls around her heart. I know from experience how much easier it is to "pretend" everything is okay and doesn't hurt in the slightest rather than risk being pitied or seen as heartbroken to the outside world. She is a master at doing this and Puck has a huge mountain to climb once he figures out how to do that. But like us, he knows ( ... )

jailynn24 April 21 2011, 15:27:47 UTC

A lot about Lauren and Puck reminds me of Ashlee and Coop. LOL I miss those two so much. Did you hear that another two soaps have been canceled. One Life To Live and All My Children... it's a sad time. *sadface*

Thank you so much for the comment love, Tray!!! You make me smile so much. And I agree angst makes happiness all the more amazing. **hugs**

drd2 April 5 2011, 02:28:20 UTC

This chapter like all the others was EXCELLENT!!!! Even though it may have not turned out the way you wanted it to. As the reader I wouldn't change anything. I think it was great and really can't wait for the next one!

jailynn24 April 21 2011, 15:30:49 UTC

Thank you so much. Your words mean the world to me. I hope you like the newest chapter. *g*

xcape_reality03 April 5 2011, 05:01:16 UTC

Oh man!! This is just, I can't even... it's so good. I know you were worried about how it was written but I see no reason at all for you to fret! It excellent and very vulnerable (that's how I felt ( ... )

jailynn24 April 21 2011, 15:47:27 UTC

I'm a lot like her as well. I tend to shut down a little when someone/something hurts me. I can pretend with the best of them. Making Lauren leave Glee was a choice I made early on. If and when she comes back I want it to be with an open heart...I haven't decided if she will return yet. LOL

Puck has so many issues going on. He feels things deeply but tries so hard not to. I love how complicated he can be.

Chuck- I love him. LOL I wanted him to be another voice of reason. Especially because Lauren and Puck are so stubborn. *g*

Thank you so much for commenting on the chapter. It means the world to me. *g*

escritoireazul April 5 2011, 06:06:03 UTC

Dude, this is kinda glorious. And I am a little bit of a horrible person because I was laughing all the way through it because it was so very awesome. I love the way Quinn calls both of them on lying to themselves, and that though they're probably pretty good liars to other people, they can read each other and Quinn can see right through them both. The gossip was especially awesome in this, from the school talking to the glee club conference call (I think this was the point where I started laughing and just couldn't stop, even though it was breaking my heart at the same time). Lauren being friends with at least one of the guys on the wrestling team is fantastic; I am such a fan of Chuck. (I kinda want someone to try to call the two of them Luck, though, and see how that goes over, hahaha.)

As sad as this whole thing is between Lauren and Puck, this line really broke my heart: She most definitely didn't need to be around people that only saw her as a placeholder until something better came along. Oh, my poor girl. You do deserve ( ... )

jailynn24 April 21 2011, 15:56:14 UTC

I will take laughing over eye-rolling any day of the week. LOL Quinn is my voice of reason (along with Chuck). I loved when the writers of the show would give her a chance to really be there for others. (One of my favorite scenes being the one with Mercedes in the nurses office in season one- a storyline they dropped just like the friendship- grrr). I have to admit I love Chuck. And I already have a plan in mind for him because of that. You have no idea how close I came to naming Chuck/Lauren- Luck 2.0.

Schue is such a freak. I know in his mind he is a great teacher and a steady hand, but he crosses so many lines. *shudder* I do believe he would try to be there for Lauren though.

thank you so much for the comment. I hope you like the next one. *g*