Fiction: Serving Up Trouble (Chapter 15)

[jailynn24]

First let me say, that I just read there might be a Saved By The Bell reunion. *grin* I loved that show when I was a kid...hell I still watch it when I can catch it. I'm so excited by the thought of the Bayside group being together again. *giggles* I had such a crush on Zach. *la sigh* Second, sorry for the delay in chapters. I've been working on

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[angelzqq]

Awwwwwww. First, someone needs to beat the hell of of Jill and get it over with. Oh wait. Maybe Kane needs to beat the hell out of Jill and then she'll understand. Bitch! *deep calming breath* lol Love Katherine. She's so great. Loved the 20 questions again. I was thinking, yayyyy 20 questions again (and again damn it that I didn't think of it first, lol). Chance needs to make Ashlee understand that you don't have to say no for it to be rape. Oh sure, in a court of law they'd spin it that way, but if you feel like you're in danger if you don't let them, same same. It's rape. And awwww @ Chance at the end. He is made of awesome! And so was this chapter sissy! I know you were worried about it but you have absolutely no reason to worry. Great job! *hugs*

twinnie

[jailynn24]

I love you call Grady - Kane. *laughing* I can say that Jill will not get a beat down, but she will get doused in a vat of shame. Katherine is a wonderful character. I have always been pro-Kay. I love my grandparents but I wouldn't mind having her be one as well. *laughing* The 20 questions is fun, but really difficult at the same time because I lose track of how many questions I've done and at times it's a witch to think of fun/sorta interesting questions to ask. *laughing* I'm not that bright. Thank you so much for the bias and appreciated love. **hugs** I have the best twinnie in the world.

~Sissy

[anonymous]

Let me just say I am so loving Katherine and I really want someone to smack Jill *grin*. Awesome chapter, Jai!!! As I was reading this I was remembering the whole David Kimble thing. I had totally forgotten that storyline. This is an amazing story Jai, can't wait for more. srobinso21

[jailynn24]

I think everyone wants to smack Jill at this point. *laughing* The David Kimble/Nina storyline is one of the few storylines that stayed in my mind. Tricia Cast was brilliant in it. Thank you so much to the love, girlie. It means the world to me. **hugs**

[jyl22075]

Awww, Jai, what a fabulously perfect chapter. It was very smart of Chance to mix the heavy questions in with the light-hearted ones. Oh, and Chance and I have something and common, I know all the words to Ice Ice Baby too, but I'm not embarrassed about it. *laughing* Poor, poor Ash, I hope Chance can make her see that even though she didn't say no, it was still rape.

Oh and I watched SBTB obsessively when I was young and every now and then I still catch an episode on cable. I would love to see a reunion.

[jailynn24]

Saved by the bell is one of those shows that I still enjoy from my childhood. It's cheesy, but fun. *laughing* I think I've seen every episode at least a hundred times. *grin*

When Ice, Ice Baby comes on I jam out. I know all the words as well and I'm not embarrassed either. *laughing* But I figured that Chance might be. He is our age after all...in my story. *grin* Ashlee knows deep down that what happened to her was rape. It's the next big hurdle. Thank you for the love. **hugs**

[eertyecal]

I just love Nina and her relating to Ashlee's problems through her experience with David Kimble was just genius. Jill hates it when Katherine is right and she is wrong and you delivered that perfectly. I could see Jill's mouth clenching and Katherine marching up the steps. The 20 questions was a very creative way for Chance to get Ashlee to open up. You always come up with the most interesting ideas. To have Chance tell her he wanted her more than anything in this world was the perfect ending to this chapter. Protective Chance is even hotter than protective Coop! Can't wait to read more. BTW I'm a big fan of SBTB too. My 15 year old nephew is named after Zach Morris *grin*

[jailynn24]

The David Kimble story was one of the great moments in soap history and Tricia Cast was fantastic in it. I don't know if the show/writers remember it, but I do. *grin* It seemed natural to have Nina relate to Ashlee through that part of her past. Jill does hate Kay being right. It's one of those things that gets under her skin. *laughing* I have fun playing with that. 20 questions is becoming a Chanlee thing in my head. It allows them to be honest with each other in a fun and easy way...which was needed for this chapter. Thank you for the overwhelming love you give me, Tray. You are the best!

Oh and yay another Saved By The Bell fan. *grin* I adored that show. I think its so cool your nephew is named after Zach. *grin* He was always my favorite character. **hugs**

[marcalbabe]

Okay, Jai...first off why were you so worried? This chapter was *amazing*! I LOVED the twenty questions and the thing with Grady...I gotta say..not to get too personal on here, but that really hit home for me. I used to be with someone who was abusive and I can relate to every emotion that Ashlee feels. It's hard to get rid of someone when you think they love you and they're hurting you. I did it and Ashlee did it. This chapter....just no words to express how amazing it was. Can I borrow Chance :)? He's just so swoon worthy! Katherine, I love how she was so kind and so there for Ashlee. And Jill....that girl has problems. What she did to Ashlee and the way she feels about her...it reminds me so much of the Mac/Jill early relationship. No one is good enough for her son or in this case, Grandson. I know that Chance will step up for Ashlee and not let his grandmother get in their way. I so cannot *wait* for more! This is my favorite story right now!

[jailynn24]

I'm sorry you had to go through something like that. **hugs** My best friend (which is the basis for Ashlee's story...with some soapy stuff added in) went through that with her boyfriend. He was very abusive but he was smart about it. We only found out when the bruises were starting to become visable. Luckily she, you and Ashlee have gotten out of that situation. I'm so honored you would share something so personal with me. Thank you for that. Thank you so much for the kind words you wrote about the chapter. I have to admit I was dissatsified with the entire thing, but that might have been because I'd been staring at it for so long. *laughing* The Ashlee/Jill thing does have some Jill/Mac and Jill/Nina undertones. Jill doesn't like anyone she deems unworthy around her babies. *laughing* Thank you again so much. **hugs**