Fiction: Take a Deep Breath and Jump

[jailynn24]

Here is the last story in the Love and War series. I don't know if anyone remembers these so here are all the previous stories, so you can refresh your memory. *grin*

1. Money, Marriage and Mistakes (prompt: Greed)
2. Playing the Game (prompt: Hate)
3. The Best Revenge is to Be Happy (prompt: Joy)
4. In One Second (prompt: Fear)
5. Tidal Wave (prompt:

Comments

[eertyecal]

Perfect ending to a wonderful story. I especially like how Ashlee was the one to be a little slow on the take in this story and calling the baby Buzz, how cute! I liked how Shayne was there to "push" her when she needed it, just how a real friend would be. And Buzz, what a wise man he was. I could actually see the picture of Buzz looking down at them kissing and the smirky smile that was on his face *grin*. He knew all they needed was a nudge in the right direction. His work was finally done. Yeah, he'd definitely be smiling.. **hugs**

[jailynn24]

Aww, I'm so happy you liked the ending. I really wanted the "shoe" to be on the other foot in this story. I wanted Ashlee to be the one that put the breaks on the relationship because she is scared and I wanted Coop to be the one that laid all the cards on the table. *grin* Couldn't you just see Buzz smiling down on them from on high? *laughing* He was the one that brought them together...as it should always be. **hugs** Thank you for the comment love Tray!

[jyl22075]

The ending of this story makes me insanely happy, Jai. It was just perfect and I love that Shayne found someone of his own. *hugs*

[jailynn24]

Shayne had to find the perfect girl. I felt so bad making him in love with Ashlee while she was in love with Coop and I didn't want their friendship to break. I loved their friendship in this story. I'm so glad you liked the ending too. **hugs**

[anonymous]

Great ending. Great romance. It made my heart happy to see a believeable ending for Cooplee. You are the best and you always do the job right.--BettyB

[jailynn24]

Aww, I'm glad you thought that, Betty. Thank you so much for reading and replying. ***hugs*** I means so much to me.

[angelzqq]

I love happy endings *grins* This was a great ending to a great story. Thanks for the good stuff sissy! *hugs and love*

twinnie

[jailynn24]

I'm glad you liked the ending, twinnie. **hugs and love** Thank you for the love and hugs.

~Sissy

[maurinak]

OMG, that is one of your best, Jai! Seriously, I am completely in love with that story. That one is going on my "re-read" list!

Fabulous ending to a fantastic story! *hugs*
~Emm

[jailynn24]

Oh yay! That makes me so happy. *happy dance* I'm thrilled you liked the stories so much. Thank you for the comment hugs. ***hugs***