Fiction: A Stranger in A Bar part 5

[jailynn24]

Here is the next chapter...

Title: A Stranger In A Bar

Chapter: 5

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Comments

[jyl22075]

Poor Shayne! He really does have some baggage. I think Ash can help him out with that. *wink* This was a great chapter. It was nice getting a bit of background on Shayne. Also, I love that he already knows about Ashlee's rather sordid past. *laughing* I can't wait for the next chapter, girlie. *hugs*

[jailynn24]

Shayne has been through a lot on the show and you know me, *laughing* I love pushing. Ashlee is going to be on the flip side with Shayne. She is going to be the one that does the saving. *grin* Thank you for the love, Jenny. I always look forward to seeing what you think. ***hugs***

[rivilli]

great chapter! coming home to read this always makes my day better! :)

I love Daisy, but she can be a little self-centered or maybe that's just me...

[jailynn24]

Aww, thank you Becca. I'm so glad that you are enjoying this story so much. ***hugs***

Daisy really is self-centered. She has always been one to talk about her problems, but rarely does she ask about Ashlee. *sigh* Weirdly, I still like their friendship though.

[anonymous]

I really am enjoying the chance to get to know Shayne. I am anxious to see how you are going to write about his past in Iraq and his future encounters with Ashlee!! I am lovin' it so please keep it coming! Thanks, hugs! Aus

[jailynn24]

Thank you, Aus! **hugs** I'm so glad you are enjoying "getting to know" Shayne. I hope you continue to like him as the story goes on. *grin* Shaylee is back in the next chapter. *wink*

[anonymous]

One more thing, I am so glad that Ash is as tired of the Daisy show as meeeeeee!

[jailynn24]

Oh, Daisy... *sigh* She is all about her isn't she? *laughing*

[anonymous]

Love the way you're incorporating Dylan into the story and the history between Shayne and Marina. You are so great at following the show's history. I remember Shayne and Marina and they were a great couple back then. However, this story is making Shayne and Ashlee seem like such a better match at least at this point in their lives. That just shows what a great writer you are. I love this story. Can't wait for Chapter 6.--BettyB

[jailynn24]

I remember their storyline from way back when. I loved how Shayne made her seem so much freer and I loved the fact that he was willing to die for her. History is so important to the way I'm planing to write him. Thank you for the lovely words, Betty. *hugs* I'm so excited that you are open to Shaylee. *grin*