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anonymous August 14 2008, 02:22:51 UTC
Love it,love it,love it!! Awesome and i can't wait for the next chapter! hehehe ;)

Thanks!
-Mel

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jailynn24 August 14 2008, 11:53:38 UTC
Thank you, Mel. I'm so happy you liked it. *hugs*

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angelzqq August 14 2008, 02:34:20 UTC
You wrote this chapter REALLY well ss. Everything flowed perfectly and I love Coop's relationship with Brandon. And I love how Ashlee is always watching then, mentally taking photos of the love they have for each other. Very well done and there better be another chapter posted when I come on tomorrow night *stern look* lol *hugs*

et

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jailynn24 August 14 2008, 11:57:09 UTC
Wow, that is a huge compliment. ***hugs*** I was so worried about how this chapter would come out because it's been so long since I've written for this group. Ashlee falls in love with Coop more and more each time she sees him with their son. And Coop is the same way with Ashlee. *sigh* I promise that I will try to have the next chapter done as early as possible. *grin* Thank you again for the ET love. **hugs**

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anonymous August 14 2008, 11:37:01 UTC
Very good chapter. I loved the way you are able to remember the history between Ashlee and Coop. I loved the haircuts, the pictures, the love between the three of them. Poor Ashlee, she once again is feeling insecure. I cannot wait to read the proposal chapter. You are doing an awesome job.--BettyB

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jailynn24 August 14 2008, 12:02:47 UTC
Thank you so much, Betty. I think I'm the only one but I thought when Coop's head was shaved he looked really hot. *laughing* history is such a huge part of this couple and in the broader sense the story. Ashlee will be feeling a little foolish very soon. *grin* Thank you for the love, Betty. ***hugs***

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maurinak August 14 2008, 14:35:36 UTC
YAY...Promise is back! *grin* Here's me being redundant yet again, but I freaking love this story! All those happy family images just about did me in. *grin* I especially loved the part where Brandon and Coop shaved their heads...it struck a chord with me. My friend's daughter (who has cancer) also decided on her terms when she wanted her head shaved and one of her wonderful and caring Aunts told her she would shave her head with her when it was time. They went to the salon together, sat down and got it done. So, that description brought a couple of tears to my eyes. Great job!

Anyway I digress. Great chapter and I can't wait to read Ashlee's reaction when she realizes why Coop has been so secretive.

Loved it! *hugs*
~Emm

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jailynn24 August 14 2008, 18:18:23 UTC
Aww, I am so in awe of anyone that has battled or is battling cancer. The shaving of Coop and Brandon's heads was to show that strength comes in many different forms and sizes. Brandon is strong enough to know what's right for him, just like your friend's daughter. Please let them know I'm thinking of them. ***hugs***

I'm so glad you liked the chapter. *grin* Ashlee is going to feel more than a little foolish when Coop lets her in on the secret. *laughing* Thank you for the hugs Emm. ***hugs***

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anonymous August 14 2008, 15:29:31 UTC
great chapter...can't wait for Coop to prospose!!

Nicole

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jailynn24 August 14 2008, 18:14:50 UTC
Thank you for the feedback, nicole. **hugs**

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