Lisa, this is great. That's a college essay. Send it, that is not cliche, it feels like a movie that you're watching when you read it. If you like it and put your heart into it then you should be proud of this work. SEND IT!!!!!!
you can literally feel the heart and emotion behind this, thats what good writing is. its amazing, the power that a memory has over you. that was beautiful. -ftg
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that was beautiful.
-ftg
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