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Push and Pull 2 [complete]

Jan 31, 2012 02:24

title: push and pull
pairing: 2J
genre: smut
rating: nc-17
length: one shot, 9655 words

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rating: nc-17, jaesu one shot, genre: smut

Comments 27

kimheechulmiki January 31 2012, 01:54:54 UTC

first?!! yay! I loved this so much!
Both Jae Joong & JunSu are so cute and adorable here. Lots of misunderstandings, pushing eh, pulling mmm... but in the end love prevailed!

Made a great start for my day.
I totally understand what you meant by not giving roles to the err... characters in the fic. Just let them go at it or each other! :D
I missed reading your fics, so thank you so much for this!

shu_jaesu January 31 2012, 08:09:35 UTC

yes, you're first! *throws confetti* thank you! I'm glad you loved it and your comment made my day, you know how to say the right things that keep me going :)
I'm glad you understand me in that aspect, too!
thanks again <3

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shu_jaesu January 31 2012, 08:12:59 UTC

Nah, Jiji doesn't enjoy Jaejoong screaming in pain, but as we know, he's not screaming in pain but pleasure... and Jiji kind of understands that Junsu isn't doing him any harm, if you know what I mean XD
I'm glad you think it's cute, thanks for commenting!

cc9095 January 31 2012, 10:15:51 UTC

I really like that Junu had an upper hand in this relation ship or to be precise learned how to be in control of situation. There are not many fics where Junsu is portrayed like that. Thank =)

shu_jaesu January 31 2012, 15:10:16 UTC

nah, Junsu doesn't have an upper hand, that's what I'm trying to say all along, they can both lead but step back, too, if it's necessary. Well, thanks for liking his character anyway!

cc9095 January 31 2012, 15:14:41 UTC

But he did had an upper hand in bed scene, that's what I was talking about XD

shu_jaesu January 31 2012, 15:39:18 UTC

Oh yeah, Junsu had an upper hand in the bed scene but not in the relationship as a whole, don't forget that Jaejoong topped in part 1 ^^

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byebyesarangdo January 31 2012, 10:30:20 UTC

Oh my god XDDDD The scene with Jiji was so hilarous. I can sooo imagine Jaejoong being all overprotective over Jiji LOL. A very nice story, especially since it's JaeSu! Even though I read it in school in free hours I enjoyed it very much.

shu_jaesu January 31 2012, 15:19:50 UTC

:D Thank you, I'm glad you liked Jiji's scene! And so happy to meet new Jaesu fans! Thanks for enjoying my the story!

winged_kame January 31 2012, 12:16:38 UTC

I liked this a lot! Very well written, realistic with the problems with first time sex. Love the switching of roles and not needing to fall into seme/uke.

shu_jaesu January 31 2012, 15:23:55 UTC

Thank you! It's my first attempt at writing fail sex, haha. Glad you loved and understood the story <3