[EXO] Eclipse (1/?)

[jaejee]

Title: Eclipse
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: ot12
Word count: 2,878
Genre: fantasy, !MAMA, AU
Summary: One prophecy. Two countries. One war. Twelve people, and a nation to save.

A/N: This is a high fantasy story. For now, I'm thinking about leaving this ot12, but there will be plenty of bromance going on. The story has been inspired strongly by MAMA

Comments

[kimkai]

Yay, chaptered longfic fantasy AU! I like it a lot. I definitely feel the Avatar vibes in this one, and I like how you're blending it with the EXO folklore. Exo is seriously the only group I have ever seen come out with such an elaborate backstory, and its only halfway told- we still don't know how the Twelve can reunite to save the tree. And that is where talented people like you come in, to take this canon and make it into awesome fanworks while including things from other awesome fandoms. I totally approve. Thanks for sharing this. :D

[jaejee]

Thank you :)
I agree that SM really outdid themselves with EXO's back-story. Though I lot of people seem to dislike it :D But it triggered lots of awesome fics, so I absolutely loooove that little fairy-tale :D
Thanks for reading, liking and commenting :)

[mayumi_san]

THIS IS SO INTERESTING

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so excited for the next chapter!!!

[jaejee]

THANK YOU :D

I should update soon, so please look forward to it ;D

[vintagealpaca]

YAYY YOU POSTED 8D Despite having already read this before, it doesn't make me any less excited to see this <3 I still want to throttle the stupid Elders, but that's beside the point. The point is is that Kris is forever wonderful duizhang and omg he makes a hottttt prince /drools

can i request a spot for future chapters? :D

[jaejee]

Oh heyyyyyy there :D
Yup, last night I was torturing myself thinking about this one essay I need to write (I'm supposedly working on it at the moment >.<) and so I got a this persistent feeling that I just HAD to post the first chapter xD I'm a master at finding things to do when I'm supposed to be doing something else >.>

I'm glad you dislike the Elders. It means I'm writing this right XD And Krissss. Oh beautiful, hot Kris <3 Though maybe I should note somewhere that the Kris in the story has longer fair hair- nothing like the military hairstyle he's sporting right now :DD I have actually photoshopped his head on a model wearing badass urban fashion once... I didn't really need the pic for anything, since I usually just draw all the outfits from the story by hand, but I couldn't resist seeing Kris wearing something so cool XDDDD

I'll reply to your email sometime soon, maybe tonight if I manage to reach my goal of 1000 words before nighttime. I hate academic writing. Makes my brain hurt ._.

[hipployta]

OOOOHHHHH! I like this introduction...though it does not bode well for the people what will come

My dongsaeng Kris...Fan didi you are so awesome as a Prince!

[jaejee]

I'm glad you like it :) why do you think it doesn't bode well for the people to come though? :D

Kris is awesome as anything! But I think he makes an especially awesome price! :)

[hipployta]

War is never good for the regular people who don't initiate it but have to fight it...and the civilian populace gets it worse in these situations

[jaejee]

True. But maybe there will not be a war. Some battles are won with words. Some, however, require swords. And some wielding powers ;)