So Much Mine: Section Seventeen

[wedspawn]

Section Seventeen
NOTE: I will not be updating on Thursday. I am in charge of cooking for Thanksgiving. Please plan accordingly. :::grins:::

Pairing: JaeHo
Rating: Overall NC-17. This section has a few naughty words. No lemons.
Cotton candy and lavender bunnies provided by: RanaloreSummary: The beginning of a shifting relationship. Hot Korean boys. Sex.

Comments

[xiaobai7988]

8D!!! You are early today! ^__^ I nearly squealed in class again~

One word to describe this chapter: Sweet~ I went 'awwwww' at Jaejoong's shyness~ Made me smile, since I have been reading Jaejoong being sad or angry for the past few chapters~

Micky is a good friend. He reminds Jaejoong about the risk of the relationship failing, but he also let Jaejoong know that the others will be there with him. I love the comment about how no one will let Jaejoong leave~ :)

I like Yunho's part as well. It seemed like a very important step that Yunho took when he said 'he's my boyfriend'. Keep up the good work, Yunho~! 8D

And the jaeho in the last part is....subtly erotic *_* Which is really lovely. I really love your writing~ ^___^

Can't wait for the next chapter~!

[wedspawn]

no squealing in class! the teacher would be oh so mad at me :) ♥♥♥

i wanted to show jae's inner shyness :D and the flirtiness he has in him. yunho did make that step. and well, yeah...the jaeho... a very subtle erotic i hoped :)

thank you! i am glad you liked it! ♥♥♥♥

[kahel_luna]

i think for the succeeding chapters, i will smile like a silly little girl, always. it's becoming a habit that my colleague beside me is confused why i smile so much. hahaah.

don't you know how much i want to tread the world right now and find the hand of the man that would call so much mine?

i think after this, aside from smiling, my steps will be light as if i'm floating. i really feel i am. ♥

[wedspawn]

::::grins:::: i hope you find that yunho/jaejoong love :) it is worth it. ♥♥♥♥♥ i am glad you liked it :) i hope :) :::crosses fingers::: and many hugs.

don't bump your head on the balloons :) ♥♥♥

[kahel_luna]

oh no,i don't mind balloons. haha. i don't mind anything right now.

la la la la...~

i hope i find it too. i secretly wish every breathe i do. if it's like this, i know it's worth it.

happy thanksgiving~

[hyungie]

“That is my boyfriend.” Yunho spoke suddenly.

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

sweet. he's admitting his feelings. so he knows it in his heart. if only jae knows what happened at the stall. he'd prolly have tears in his eyes.

yoochun has a beautiful character. the dialogues between jaechun is what i love most in this chapter. ok, maybe next after yunho admits the boyfriend part. :P

super early today, woman. i shall need some patience in me for your update on Friday. happy cooking! ♥

[wedspawn]

♥♥♥♥ thank you! and yes, that line just fit. yunho refused to move without saying that :::grins::: so there it is.

it was overstepping but hell, it was gonna happen. the jaechun is fun :) yoochun is a good good cee for this :)

and yeah, i was early. my words were out and i was done :) thank you for reading! ♥♥♥ i hope to get wednesday out on time :D

[blumisterie]

Wa! I've been waiting for this all day! *HeHeHe*

I laughed so much at YunHo's first line...the one about them always being alone when fighting, but when they want to do all the "couply" things, everyone wants to be around them. I don't know why...OK, maybe I didn't laugh out loud...more like giggled, but oh well...same idea. *LoL*

I just totally died when YunHo told those university guys that Jae was his boyfriend. I wonder what JaeJae's reaction would be to hear YunHo so possessive of him...*mind wanders*.

Gah, again, I can't wait until your next update!

[wedspawn]

♥♥♥♥ grins ♥♥♥♥

i thought it would be nice to have a small excursion out and yes, they just won't be left alone when they want to be! :::grins:;: and yes, he did want to smash their faces :) yunho against the college students. :)

someday..jaejae will hear yunho speak those words :)

♥♥♥ thank you for reading and waiting for the next update! ♥♥♥

[worldawaits]

ahhh such inspiring intimate moments between the two!
and so funny how they were thinking of ditching the rest of the boys in this date haha...

all my four senses went haywire while i was reading the "invisible kiss"...and i shall never look at a chestnut the same way again <3

happy thanksgiving!

[wedspawn]

♥♥♥ thank you! ♥♥♥ i enjoyed the invisible kiss too. and yeah, chestnuts... :::grins::: they're apparently very good on dates. :D

you have a good thanksgiving too! turkey! ♥♥

thank you for reading!