ficlet: a clean getaway

May 10, 2009 14:08

[a clean getaway]
Jon/Tom, a follow-up to [a matter of policy]
ficlet requested (kind of) by imogenics

a clean getaway )

panicfic, ficlets, bandfic, fic

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extemporally May 11 2009, 07:45:02 UTC
This was really lovely!

"One big hit and then you're done, then we hit the road."

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jae_w May 12 2009, 01:29:49 UTC
Thanks so much!

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novalinedy May 11 2009, 08:19:27 UTC
I love this verse so much!

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jae_w May 12 2009, 01:29:58 UTC
Thank you!

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proteinscollide May 11 2009, 13:54:25 UTC
Oh, that last bit. I didn't see it coming, and the fact it ratchets up the tension again, just when I'd settled into the idea that Tom and Jon could have a happy ending - OH. Because I started the fic feeling relieved, like, They did pull that last heist off, huh. I really liked this, even though now I'm still really worried about them all in this 'verse.

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jae_w May 12 2009, 01:30:17 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

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imogenics May 11 2009, 19:13:58 UTC
This has basically everything I could want from Tom/Jon, including all the glancing references to what Tom likes, and what he might do in back alleys when nobody has to know, and your wonderful take on Jon's lazy capability and charm -- perfect. Thank you! <3

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jae_w May 12 2009, 01:30:38 UTC
basically everything I could want from Tom/Jon

hail of bullets, right?

xoxo

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chibigirl626 May 12 2009, 00:11:08 UTC
*squeaky noises* I loved the first part of this, and I was so happy to see a continuation, oh man. Tom and Jon in Cuba! I love the end, how you got everyone all happy and "aww, it's going to work out!" and then boom, Tom still has to get through one more job.

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jae_w May 12 2009, 01:30:50 UTC
Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it!

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