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jae_w

update.

Apr 25, 2006 20:20

My first slashfic25 story!

Blind Spot
Justin. What's in yours?

Read it on the web:
[Blind Spot]

Or here on lj:
( [Blind Spot] )

pop, slashfic25, fic

Comments 21

joyfulseeker April 26 2006, 01:52:19 UTC

I really liked this. I always end up reading your stories twice to put all the pieces together.

Love it love it love it, all the bits that lead to the conclusion. Or, at least, the one I think I've got in my head, the one with the happy ending.

Also, each of the guys is perfect, but Joey was especially nice, perfectly and recognizably Joey.

jae_w April 26 2006, 18:17:51 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the Joey section -- I was pretty pleased with that myself. (And for once, the ending in my head for this story is a happy ending too.)

ex_thissuga April 26 2006, 02:08:30 UTC

I hadn't realized how much I'd missed reading your stuff until I jumped into this one. I especially like:

The awful thing about knowing someone so long, Justin thought, was that you could know, absolutely one hundred percent know that they were pushing your buttons on purpose, but even with that knowledge your buttons still ended up pushed.

that is the best line ever.

jae_w April 26 2006, 18:19:19 UTC

Hey, stranger! It's good to see you around popslash parts again. And thanks so much for your comment -- I have to admit that that came out of an argument I had with my sister not long ago where I thought, I know exactly how she's trying to push my buttons but it's still working!

ex_thissuga April 26 2006, 19:01:31 UTC

I've been thinking fondly on popslash the last little while (well, fic in general) - work is giving me way too much time on my hands.

and, can I confess? I was reading this while someone was doing exactly that line. It was so appropriate.

ex_thissuga April 26 2006, 19:02:10 UTC

oops. That was me.

sinensiss April 26 2006, 03:40:21 UTC

ahhhhhh. ::basks:: I loved every word, and when I got to the end and looked at the title again, and said of course Justin is Chris' blind spot, I loved it more.

jae_w April 26 2006, 18:20:12 UTC

Aw, thank you!

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jae_w April 26 2006, 18:20:45 UTC

Thanks so much -- I'm always happy to make you read a little popslash again.

frausorge April 26 2006, 06:15:27 UTC

Oh, how fabulous! I love how the segments track both across each group member and across time, and how Justin moves closer to accepting responsibility with each one.

jae_w April 26 2006, 20:48:14 UTC

Thank you -- I'm glad you liked it!