Fic: Back In Time Chapter 1

[jadekirk]

Title: Back In Time

Comments

[persiflage_1]

I have a *really* bad feeling about this!

James is a big tease not telling Jack which incarnation he was/is with.

And how can you take over the planet 'in a good way'?

PS Typo: He's dead," Jack blurted out, watching as the red head's face from shock to sadness.

You're miss a word or two there after 'face'.

[jadekirk]

Thank you.

Yep, he's a tease all right and he's not telling the whole story on how he took over. LOL

Ack! Thanks for spotting the typo. *major hugs*

[persiflage_1]

Somehow I'm, not surprised he's not telling the whole story.

(And please excuse my typos in the previous comment! *is shamefaced now*)

[jadekirk]

*hugs* No worries. It happens to everyone. *more hugs*

[catholicphoton]

James took over a planet? LOL! I'll bet he had fun!

Yay for Jack getting a second chance with Ianto! Here's hoping that this time he won't be so emotionally constipated ;-)

Oh, and James' outfit? *thud*

[jadekirk]

Oh yes! He had lots of fun taking it over. Hahah

Yes, Jack needs to show and tell Ianto how he feels. If he doesn't, James might have to shoot him or something.

Why, thank you. Glad you like it.