Fic: Livin' On A Prayer (R)
Title: Livin' On A Prayer
Rating: R
Summary: James finds himself in a sticky situation. Where's the Doctor when he needs him?
Author's Notes: Not mine, only wish they were. Written for the occhallenge fic challenge thing. Prompt table can be found here.
Prompt: Hurt
Warning: Lots of blood and a body. Yes, I'm being mean to James. Please don't hate me. This is my ( Read more... )
Rating: R
Summary: James finds himself in a sticky situation. Where's the Doctor when he needs him?
Author's Notes: Not mine, only wish they were. Written for the occhallenge fic challenge thing. Prompt table can be found here.
Prompt: Hurt
Warning: Lots of blood and a body. Yes, I'm being mean to James. Please don't hate me. This is my ( Read more... )
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James was very brave to fight for Earth that way, and very true to his personality to the last bit of it!
I know he's going to be alright, right?
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As for whether he's alright, well, that's a surprise. :D
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He secretly felt that he was like in a Robin Hood film and the alien was a blue Sheriff. "Would that make the Doctor Maid Marion?"
Teehee!!
Couple of beat-ish comments:
"It is a good day to die," Kaarganoff sneered with an evil smirk, and suddenly thrust his sword up upwards into James' stomach, elicited a gasp of pain and surprise from the red head
That "up" is unnecessary before "upwards", and it should "eliciting" not "elicited".
A hand on his sleeve made the Doctor turn around slightly to be face face with Rob.
"face to face"...
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Eek! Thanks for spotting the typos. *massive hugs*
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You're welcome re the typos! *hugs back*
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Massive win for that one! XD
Oh, and cliff-hangers make me crazy! (in a good way) ;-)
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I'm guessing I should write a sequel so you find out James' fate, shouldn't I? :D
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