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chosenfire28 September 13 2009, 01:34:28 UTC
HOLY HELL I AM IN AWE!!!!

This is so amazing I am just all kinds of stunned and happy, you did a wonderful job, they story was fast paced, heart wrenching, and so good I wanted to keep reading forever. I love the characters and the relationships you established between them, I ADORE the relationship between Peter and Sylar, it really comes across as powerful and passionate, and Arthur being the Spider was the perfect set up, because it was so obvious when it was revealed.

You did a great job and I am so glad you wrote this story and shared it with the rest of us!

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jadedoll September 14 2009, 02:23:34 UTC
Thanks for that. *curtsey* This was massive to write, but the beautiful men just wouldn't leave me alone. And doesn't rtwofan's art rocks it up to the next level?

Thank you for reading and for your awesome job pulling the threads of this comm together. I really appreciate the chance to play in this sandbox.

Cheers.

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rtwofan September 13 2009, 02:00:45 UTC
Well, you already know how much I think this rocks XD

I was just wondering if you wanted me to cross post this (basically, the same post you put on the big boom comm) to sylar_peter. That way it'll get a lot more traffic and it'll appeal to the right audience :D

If not, that's cool. I think I'm going to post mine after the boom, in three seperate parts, instead of dumping it all at once.

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jadedoll September 13 2009, 03:20:14 UTC
Hey Honey. Your banner is so lovely, best choices for the characters ever.

Thanks that would be great. I haven't even thought about posting to other comms yet, so if you don't mind the effort I'd appreciate it. Hmmm is there anywhere else that you think they should be shown? Any are fine by me.

*glomps*

Can't wait for your baby to be up as well.

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jadedoll September 14 2009, 02:04:28 UTC
Thank you very much for the great feedback. My musi treated me well this time around. I couldn't resist giving Claire a baby and then rtwofan put in the clip of her bouncing the baby(herself yeah but it's a baby)and that just made my day.

Cheers.

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davincis_girl September 13 2009, 04:21:21 UTC
This was so entertaining that I'm up long past when I should be sleeping. Great job. I enjoyed the happy ending.

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jadedoll September 14 2009, 02:01:49 UTC
Oh, sorry I kept you up late, but I'm not sorry you liked the fic.

I don't think I'm capable of writing an unhappy ending so...

Thanks for reading.

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dmlpacker September 13 2009, 05:44:56 UTC
Lovely. I was just getting over my Sylar obsession, but now it's back :P

I'm just a little confused about Claude. He's a "good" guy right? So why didn't he tell anyone who The Spider was?

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jadedoll September 14 2009, 02:34:01 UTC
LOL. I admire your fortitude in getting over Sylar, that's a talent well beyond me at the minute. *g*

As to Claude, good point. Yeah he's a 'good guy' in this, just being a bit of a b**tard in his own special way. I don't think he KNEW for sure that Arthur was the Spider, but he suspected it and thus his taunt about "Daddy Long Legs". Perhaps I should have made his motivation a little more clear, but he got a bit lost in the rollercoaster I was riding in the last few chapters.

Thanks for reading and for taking the time to comment.

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