Fic: One More Cup of Coffee, part three

Oct 07, 2007 20:43

Title: One More Cup of Coffee
Previous Parts: Part One, Part Two

Part Three )

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jade_starlight October 8 2007, 03:04:21 UTC
I'm sorry I broke your brain, as that wasn't my intention at all. *g* If it makes you feel better, your broken brain will probably be in good company once zekkass gets this far. *eg*

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zekkass October 8 2007, 03:23:43 UTC
*breathes sigh of relief that Tony's safe now*

And Oversight? My brain broke at that, and the only thing that saved it was that I write Control number two as a different person. Someday I will finish a fic with C2 in it written as per my personal canon. :)

*hurries off to read final thing*

PS: Excellent. Disturbing and violent, but excellent. I will never hear that song again the same way.

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jade_starlight October 8 2007, 03:41:49 UTC
Oversight was one of those things that just sort of popped into my head when I was originally writing it, and I decided it was too cool not to include him. I did have a bit of a time trying to decide what he would have changed his name to, though. *g*

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zekkass October 8 2007, 03:46:42 UTC
I think it worked out pretty well. :)

My C2 is a flamboyant-purple suit wearing artist, and yours is a twisted psychopath. That's the only thing that saved me from gibbering.

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jade_starlight October 8 2007, 03:50:28 UTC
I don't even know why I decided that my C2 should be a twisted psychopath, I just did. *shrugs* And I liked him that way, so it all worked out. *eg*

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marginaliana October 8 2007, 17:53:27 UTC
WOW. I especially loved Control casually tossing away the shovel after he kills Stephen - for some reason, that seemed very plausible and in character (and delightfully creepy!). *shiver* And I also loved how Tony knew which brother was which. And the creepy Beatles singing, gah... I need to know what happens!

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