inspired by jakia

[jade_sabre_301]

“I have to do this.”

“Not alone.”

“Yes-”

“No!  We've made it this far-”

“Yes.  You've helped me get this far.  And you're the last one.”  A brush, hand on cheek.  “You'll always be first, though.”  A whisper.

“I won't let you go on alone.  I-”

A kiss.

“Katara,” a smile, “you have to let go.”

She wandered through the halls of the empty Fire

Comments

[beautyinsleep]

hee, I like your tag for Avatar. So true.

I don't know what has really happened yet, and I really like it (I really really like the italicized part--you're so good at dialogue) and I think you should finish it, even if it ends up being very AU--most fanfiction is that anyway. :D

[jade_sabre_301]

you say this of the girl who keeps going insane every time she even thinks she senses the word "spoiler"? XD

hahahahaha. (I like the italicized part too! I am meh about most of the rest of it, but I really like the italics.) okay, I will try. :-b

[beautyinsleep]

Ack, don't say that word! I went over and read the snippet of the Naruto story (which was quite funny--*mind boggles at Gaara/Hinata*) and I saw that your friend succumbed to the temptation! :(

Yay!

PS - I'm not sure if I've said this before, but I really like that icon. Also, very OT, but that "Ramona" song by Guster you listen to? I really like that, too. ^^

[jade_sabre_301]

(I know! Gaara/Hinata! Hahahaha!) Alas! And I know she has...but she cut it all, right?

p.s. hahaha, I picked it because Sting sang "Fields of Gold" and was the lead singer of The Police, who sang "Every Breath You Take." *is a dork*
and that Ramona song? I've been addicted to Guster for a while, but I only just found that song thanks to a fellow NaNo buddy. <3s