Alternate Ending- "Fire in the Night"

[jadd14]

 
The scarlet train screeched and slowly pulled away. There was chaos and cacophony on the platform as parents waved and shouted goodbyes to their children, but Cho’s eyes were focused unwaveringly on a streak of bright red that shone through the cloud of steam. She didn’t glance at the tall man with unruly black hair and glasses who held the red-

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[piedra_lumbre]

This is really cool. I particularly like the last line which is just perfect. Sorry that it took me a little while to get around to commenting. I read it earlier, but wasn't feeling particularly verbal at the time. Anyway, thanks for letting us see this epilogue.

[jadd14]

Yeah, glad you liked it!