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luxluthor November 3 2009, 01:41:32 UTC
Wow, very good!!
Can't help but wish it real:)
Thanks for sharing!

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jacqui_hw November 3 2009, 22:26:38 UTC
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I sort of wish it was real too. :)

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ditchwitchbitch November 3 2009, 14:57:16 UTC
You know I love this. ♥ I love how they're still very much guys at the end, and how even though Jon and Spencer aren't in it that much we know exactly how they're feeling and thinking. This is by far my favorite thing you've ever written, and it's lovely and sad and so, so good.

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jacqui_hw November 3 2009, 22:27:53 UTC
Thank you for listening to me talk about it for three months. ♥ You made it better.

It's my favourite thing I've written too!

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nyquil_love November 3 2009, 16:54:16 UTC
This was wonderful!
I just keep reading their exchange at the end, and I love it!!

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jacqui_hw November 3 2009, 22:29:16 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so pleased you liked it, especially that last part. I think that was my favourite part to write. :D

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ivesia19 November 7 2009, 06:20:35 UTC
I'm still not totally sure I am in love with you."
One of Brendon's eyebrows inched upwards. "Well that's good, because I'm not sure I'm in love with you either."
"But I want to find out," Brendon told him softly, as soon as he had composed himself.

I think I just fell in love with you.

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jacqui_hw November 7 2009, 14:26:11 UTC
I think I just fell in love with you.

It's always nice when that happens. :D Thank you!

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xoneandonlyx November 10 2009, 21:12:56 UTC
definitely my favorite line of the story:
"Hey, assface. I'm offering pizza and beer. And maybe a b-j in the car after, if you're good."
LMFAO!
This story was really freeking amazing. You're an incredibly good writer.
:)

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jacqui_hw November 14 2009, 23:26:19 UTC
Ahaha. That was actually my favourite line too. :D

Thank you, very much. This is my favourite thing that I've written. I'm glad you liked it.

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