Comments | jacosta3: FIC: Father Figure (Hollyoaks) (1/2)

jacosta3

FIC: Father Figure (Hollyoaks) (1/2)

Nov 08, 2007 05:01

Title: Father Figure ( Read more... )

Comments 9

sparta_chick November 8 2007, 14:38:55 UTC

Yikes, daddy is home! I love how confident Craig is and how he wouldn't just let Jp be, but got him to open up to him! Great start!

jacosta3 November 8 2007, 23:11:03 UTC

Thank you! Yes, Craig is trying to get to all of John Paul, to be everything he can for John Paul, that's just the way Craig is, he's all-consuming. John Paul does need that support, but also has to make the decision on his own.

ilovedoyle November 8 2007, 16:50:08 UTC

this is a brilliant concept, with a great start! cannot wait to read the next part!

jacosta3 November 8 2007, 23:23:19 UTC

Thank you, I really appreciate hearing that.

lost2mercy November 8 2007, 18:33:20 UTC

I love how Craig realises that this time it has to be him who has to be strong and support JP. And he isn't doing badly at all so far.

jacosta3 November 8 2007, 23:25:02 UTC

Thanks. I know, I'm proud of Craig.

anonymous November 8 2007, 18:55:01 UTC

I enjoyed this very much. The plotline feels true to the show, and the voices are excellent. This bit: "So that's what it's about. You get to be Superboyfriend and congratulate yourself on how nice and supportive you are. NOT EVERYTHING IS ABOUT YOU, CRAIG!!!!"
was absolutely perfect. I could hear John Paul saying that. And Craig finally feeling comfortable enough to show his affection in public is a wonderful thing.

I'm looking forward to the next part. Thanks for sharing!

allyndra November 8 2007, 18:55:51 UTC

^^ That was me. Forgot to log in.

jacosta3 November 8 2007, 23:24:36 UTC

Thank you. I always worry about whether the dialogue rings true, so hearing you say that it did makes me feel much better.