I've been through most of the fic in this comm and I'm thoroughly impressed. I know I don't comment much (I'm normally rendered incoherent after reading most of it) but believe me, it's delicious
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Couldn't get too good a sense of your writing style from the drabbles, but it looks good. I mean, at least everything was spelled right, words were in the right order, and you knew how to use commas. :) You'd be surprised.
Had an idea or two for kinky stopwatch games. ;) So for the first one, you could have the boys joking around or something, (maybe about how good they are in bed? don't know really, haven't thought it all the way through...I'll leave you the real work), and then one thing leads to another and one challenges the other that he can't make him come in , or the other way around (where he COULD make him come in whatever time). And, of course, they use the stopwatch
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well, for avante guard sex act there are the more extreme sexual practices such as fisting. There's also such things as 'docking' (which requires at least oen of the men have a foreskin), but I think for *fandom* some thing that would seem avante guard would be things that aren't seen all that often - the thing that springs to mind for me are sex toys. Though sex toys are used in RL fairly often, they don't show up in fic much.
Semi-public sex, voyerism, sex in weird/risky places....
Maybe I'm focussing more on the 'innovative' comment, but I see Jack as maybe putting ordinary objects to ahem, other uses. We know he has a fondness for photcopiers, maybe he uses other items as sex toys. (maybe they discover once and for all whether cucumbers are better than men ;-)
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Had an idea or two for kinky stopwatch games. ;)
So for the first one, you could have the boys joking around or something, (maybe about how good they are in bed? don't know really, haven't thought it all the way through...I'll leave you the real work), and then one thing leads to another and one challenges the other that he can't make him come in , or the other way around (where he COULD make him come in whatever time). And, of course, they use the stopwatch ( ... )
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Semi-public sex, voyerism, sex in weird/risky places....
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We know he has a fondness for photcopiers, maybe he uses other items as sex toys. (maybe they discover once and for all whether cucumbers are better than men ;-)
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