Ordinary, chapter 8

[jackiestolz]

summary: Ian is diagnosed with cancer. In this chapter, he sees Mel for the first time since his diagnosis.
rating: pg-13
warning: sadness and mild language.

Comments

[rahhicecream]

:( I didn't expect him to break up with her. I love this story!

[jackiestolz]

Yeah, it was a bit surprising. Thank you :)

[thestoryliveson]

IAN NEEDS TO TELL ANTHONY AHHHHHHHHH!
sorry, got over excited. this is seriously great. i feel bad for melanie, but i get that Ian doesn't want to hurt her. this made me super-eager for the next chapter and i have to wait for next week :( oh well, it'll be worth it! :D

[jackiestolz]

lol, that's okay, yeah I feel a bit bad too, but it's for a good reason. Thanks so much :)

[101giggities]

BFKSKS DNSJSKSJSB KEY MASHING TO THE MAX!
I seriously love this. I know some people hate their girlfriends, but I don't hate melanie. I actually really like her, but I lik ianthony better;) sorry lol, rambling, but I love this and can't WAIT!

[jackiestolz]

Aw, thanks so much, nothing better than knowing people are key smashing over your story! And I don't hate Mel either, but yeah, the break up was necessary. Thanks a lot :)

[101giggities]

Having people key mash is a pretty high honor xD and I love how you made Ian real up with her! It was totally unexpected, I thought he wouldnt be brave enought I do it xD I honestly love fics that surprise me:)

[jackiestolz]

Thank you so much! So do I :)

[9800andseagulls]

Oh godd its so saddddd :'(
Im loving it thoughhhh, don't let him die!

[jackiestolz]

Aw, I know it's sad. Maybe he'll die, mabybe he won't, you'll have to keep reading and find out :)

[9800andseagulls]

Oh god you tease! Ahah!