Ordinary, chapter 3

[jackiestolz]

summary: Ian is diagnosed with terminal cancer.
rating: pg-13 for some language.
warning: sadness.
this should've really been said at chapter one, but I started writing this fic on January 21. Any video Smosh released after January 18th is not present or canon in this fiction. thatzstupid.com and el smosh are also nonexistent. Any new video made by

Comments

[orangefriday]

At this rate, all my comments will consist of "ugh, why, ugh, ugh, ugh =_="

But I really liked the Lunchtime scene. Ordinary indeed. You've got them down right on. I'm really enjoying this so far despite my constant "ugh-why-ness" but that's the reaction you'd want from your readers, right?

[jackiestolz]

Thanks so much, I tried to be really accurate when it came to them just doing their normal activities, I wanted it to be really realistic. And yes, actually, the 'ugh, why' reaction is great, exactly what I want to see :)