poem I wrote

Apr 23, 2010 02:21

I know I owe some comment replies. My muse bit a few nights ago and I want to get this up in case I get an opportunity to give the url to "Dr. C ( Read more... )

nonfiction, poem

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deans_fetish April 25 2010, 07:44:29 UTC
HAHAHA thanks for the shout out! *grins*
Aww, you called me dark! *snickers* I take that as a compliment! ♥
Wonderful poem, btw.

XXX
--Fetish

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jackien1968 April 25 2010, 07:46:31 UTC
You stopped by!! So glad you liked it this much.

Course it's a compliment!

*smishes you again*

Jackie

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sexybass April 25 2010, 17:02:08 UTC
Loved your poem!!! I am Tom, remember me? I am the other half of Dandelion Wine (the younger and better looking one :-D).

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jackien1968 April 25 2010, 19:06:20 UTC
Of course I remember you sweetie!! *hug*

I'm thrilled you love my poem. Thank you so much.

Give a hug to Dave from me when you see him, I know you live far apart now.

Very belated congratulations on your marriage.

Love,
Jackie

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smash86 August 24 2010, 01:56:55 UTC
..."Angels didn't sing it in my ear in clastic tones
Or singe it in Enochian runes on my bones..."

Luvs the poem...lol...nicely done!!!

Just dropped by to say "HAPPY BIRTHDAY" for the 24th which is today here but probably tomorrow for you?!?!?!?

Anyways...have a good one and hope you enjoy your day!!

*hugz and cheerz*
smash

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jackien1968 May 16 2011, 06:33:51 UTC
Oh, gods, Smashie, friend, I'm really sorry it took me more than 8 months to answer your lovely comment ( ... )

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smash86 May 16 2011, 11:29:08 UTC
lol...in case you didn't notice I'm not one of those people that keep score...so no need for apologies!! I realy liked your poem...so abstractly dark.

I'm sorry you never got to show this poem to whoever it was intended for...I mean you could always give them a shout out but you gotta write for yourself sometimes too! The poem was so emotive and you can obviously write well so...write for yourself first, write because you're passionate about it. I'm not sure why leonidaslion left lj or where they went but you should send it to them if you know.

Anyways, don't stress about readng my stuff...I write cause it keeps me a bit saner...I don't expect people to read it and I have hardly read anything myself lately! I've just finished writing for Big Bang and I think it consumed all my free time!!

*hugz*...keep well sweetie and it was lovely to hear from you!!...don't forget to breathe!

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jackien1968 May 16 2011, 12:39:31 UTC
Thanks again.

Dr. C. claimed to have read it, but he refused to comment even anonymously.

Leonidas said she just didn't like LJ anymore. She moved to AO3. I can look for the link if you like; she's leonidaslion over there too.

I'm with you on writing to stay sane. I think that's why we write dark; we dump our darkness there before it can swallow us.

Breathe? I think I once knew that word. Hugs!

J

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