[one-shot] Connect the dots

[jackie_no_tsubo]

Title: Connect the dots
Author: JackieNoTsubo@LJ aka Flailness@tumblr aka Jackie8er@AO3
Fandom: Kanjani8
Pairing: RyOhkura
Rating: R
Warnings: Nudity.
Words: 1,890
Summary: In a paradise far away, they both have nothing to worry about, except caring for each other.
Author's note: Thank you lalois for proofreading it. For reference, I used this room,

Comments

[mikinyan]

I need a "go to the top" button here, Livejournal xD

I love the room and how Tatsu could be easily convinced xD

Now I'm gonna connect the dots I can on a HQ scan xDDDDD (at least, on his face :/)

[jackie_no_tsubo]

I think about connecting his dots a lot too T^T And I think Ohkura is actually too sleepy to understand what is going on hahahah

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[mikinyan]

I did it! xD (yeah, after a while)
http://ic.pics.livejournal.com/mikinyan/24059096/203670/203670_900.jpg
http://ic.pics.livejournal.com/mikinyan/24059096/203452/203452_900.jpg
http://ic.pics.livejournal.com/mikinyan/24059096/203990/203990_900.jpg
but I'm pretty sure Photoshop and the photographer themselves with the lights ruined more than one "dot" u____u

HAHAHAHAHA, yeah~ xD
iie :)
I love to do it ^_____^

[jackie_no_tsubo]

Amazing! hahahahahaha

[takepluche]

Ok.... How to say that... Ryo has got very weird ideas ? Seriously man, stop alcohol and drugs, they're very bad for your brain XD and Tatsu allows him to do what he wants... You're weak Tatsu ! Completely weak !! XD But I understand him... One Ryo's smile and I do wathever he wants x___x

And the deal... com'on Tatsu be strong !!! XD How dare you to go out with pen marks on your body seriously ?!!! XDDDD

Thank you for this OS, I loved it !!!

[jackie_no_tsubo]

Well, Ryo was never the most... coherent guy? hahaha And I think Kura was still too sleepy to actually know what the fuck was going on, you know? Like, it was a weird dream. xDD

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[takepluche]

Haha I imagine totaly the scene !! XD

"Well maybe it's just a dream so I can let Ryo do what he wants~
*yawn*
*Stand up*
*go outside*
Ok... In fact... it's real 0_____________0 RYO I WILL KILL YOU !!!!
I love you too sweetheart~ 8D"

[jackie_no_tsubo]

Oh, love is beautiful! hahah

[lalois]

So XD
When I first read this I was left with a lingering sense of cuteness that overwhelmed me... and that's how I managed today until the end of my office hours, with thoughts about moles and naughty boys and everything XD
BTW, I also played the connect the numbers games as a child, it was one of my favourites *O*

I loved every little piece of this and think you got really well the relaxed atmosphere you wanted to convey.
I love the time Ryo spends watching a sleeping (and naked) Ohkura, I love the line "he had raised his arm and was now scratching his head, messing even more his already messed up hair" for I can imagine this really happening in my mind and I don't know, they're just perfect çOç

And I especially LOVED this passage:
"Ohkura had that effect on him; he had the power to awake all of Ryo’s senses. And after finishing that morning kiss, he kept brushing his nose very lightly on Ohkura’s cheek, smiling widely. - You have to brush your teeth.in which Ryo, by brushing his nose onto Ohkura's skin, looks so

[jackie_no_tsubo]

Thank you, dear!! Hahaha You always quote my favorite parts and makes me really happy about your comments!! hahaha I really love how sexy and cute and sassy they can be with each other! Like a real couple, not those... perfect too lovey-dovey ones.

AND, GOSH, I KNOW WHAT FANFIC IS THAT, BUT I LOST IT, I WISHED I COULD READ IT AGAIN AND ;; LINK IT ON THE TAUNTORN AS SOON AS POSSIBLE T~T

Thank you for reading and commenting! <3

[lalois]

Jackie the fanfic with the moles is called #87 (ahahahah) and I linked it in my tauntorn page 'fav fics list', go and check and read it as much as you want, it's sooooooooo goooood <3

[jackie_no_tsubo]

Thank you!!! <3

[zaq_in_chill]

I have been dying to do that to Tacchon... Connect the dots!!!!

[jackie_no_tsubo]

I know, right?! I can just imagine how that would end up looking like!!

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[dori_liv]

This is really great.
I loved the relaxed atmosphere and how they seemed like a real couple who just loved spending time together
:)

[jackie_no_tsubo]

Thank you so much!! That was the atmosphere I was going for!! Not to perfect lovey-dovey couple, but just a real one. <3

Thank you for reading and commenting!