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orthodontist88 August 12 2010, 19:15:38 UTC
pretty intense and dark. Very excited to continue

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nong_pradu August 15 2010, 22:18:32 UTC
This story is freaky as hell! What is that THING?? Is it human, or was it once human? Shapeshifter, as Sam has guessed, or demon, maybe? (Sorry -- thinking aloud, here!)

One quick thing, though: you've got this story set in Sept/Oct of 2005, which is technically before Dean showed up at Stanford to ask Sam to help him look for their Dad. Did you maybe mean 2006? I can't remember if this was mentioned in the story summary, but is this supposed to be set in season 1 or season 2? (I'm just wondering if John is still alive. lol)

Great start and I'm looking forward to reading more. :)

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jackfan2 August 15 2010, 22:55:37 UTC
Hmmm, according to Superwiki, Dead in the Water was speculated to have taken place 13-19 November, 2005. In the story info, I mention the timeline is after Dead in the Water, so oopsie, this should be set late November 2005, not October, but definitely 2005. I'll fix that. I appreciate you pointing that out.

Glad you're intrigued and I hope you remain so engrossed all the way to the end. It's a twisty and turny road all the way there, so buckle up! Oh, and if you notice any other slips, please to let me know :D

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impaladreams August 17 2010, 08:36:58 UTC
Holy Crap!
I found this over on ff.net and despite being finding LJ a total maze, I just had to come see this, complete and with ThruTerry'sEyes's stunning imagery.
I have to say, it was well worth the time it took me to find (I am hopeless at LJ). I'm competely hooked.
I love the waitresses fawning over Dean, a very realistic reaction and poor Dean, too exhausted from taking care of Sam to be able to take advantage.
The monster(?) in the prologue was terrifying and I fear Dean has landed himself in some deep and very serious s**t this time.
Got to go - need to read more...

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Random thoughts pingback_bot March 27 2011, 20:06:35 UTC
User tari_roo referenced to your post from Random thoughts saying: [...] act your heart out, enjoy. It could be the only shot in the sun I have. and lastly Rec: Last Child [...]

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Re: Random thoughts jackfan2 March 27 2011, 21:12:34 UTC
Thank you for reccing this. I'm so very flushed with embarrassment and humbled at the kindness. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

I have another story in the works for an exclusive GEN Big Bang, I'm only hoping I can get that one finished in time. And yes, more hurt!Dean. What can I say, it's my kink? And I'm happy with it :D, glad you were/are too.

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Yeay!!!!!! cakesandwitch October 24 2011, 03:23:16 UTC
Tucking napkin in to collar, knife and fork at the ready!!! I'm digging me into the rest of this very tasty Fic!

Thanx Jax!!!!! (little yellow be-speckled, coverall wearing Minion tiptoes out of Grue's work shop, heading for the Jackfan2 is "Awesome!!!" fan club.) Cant wait to read the rest of your works!!!!

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Re: Yeay!!!!!! jackfan2 November 10 2011, 15:07:31 UTC
LOL.. ok! Not sure if this is the right word, but, ENJOY!

ASIDE: sorry for the late response, there has been illness and craziness since you commented. Things are smoothing out now. So, I'm glad to catch up here.

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