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SPN FIC: The Gift ~ Epilogue ~

Dec 11, 2009 00:29

TITLE: The Gift: ~ Epilogue ~

AUTHOR: jackfan2
CATEGORY: Gen
CHARACTERS: Dean, Sam, Castiel, OC's
WORDS: 6,900
GENRE: Humor/Hurt/Comfort
RATING: T, or PG13 for swearing
TIMELINE: Season 4
BETAS: mad_server & adrenalineshots

SUMMARY: Dean is whisked away for an urgent rescue mission, leaving Sam clamoring to find him. Between a dubious gift and a bat-shit horse, angelic ( Read more... )

the gift, birthday fic, dean, castiel, sam

Comments 26

mousme December 11 2009, 07:19:28 UTC

Hee! Dean teaching Kyle to play poker -awesome. I'm so glad that my paranoia about Kyle was just that: paranoia.

Poor Sam. Still trying to convince Dean and himself that his "powers" aren't going to turn right around and bite them in the ass.

I am a little sad the story's over, but I enjoyed every single minute of it. :)

jackfan2 December 11 2009, 14:04:39 UTC

Aw, I just couldn't do that to wee-Kyle. I sorta modeled him after my twelve year old who is a Dean!Fan completely.

I'm so glad you enjoyed reading and hung in there to the end. Your constant comments were appreciated very much.

Thanks for reading!

mousme December 13 2009, 20:44:49 UTC

My pleasure. I got a real kick out of this story. It's awesome that your twelve-year-old is a Dean!Fan. It's really cute. If I had a twelve-year-old I'd totally watch Supernatural with them. :)

(I still think Castiel is an ass, but you also "got him" really well.)

ratherastory May 17 2010, 17:12:41 UTC

Hi again! It's mousme, posting from a LJ I finally got around to making for all things SPN and fandom.

I was reminded of this story the other day by someone posting in spnstoryfinders and I thought "Why on earth have I not gone back and friended jackfan2?"

So here I am. Would it be okay if I friended you? :)

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apieceofcake December 11 2009, 09:50:56 UTC

Enjoyed, thank you :-)

jackfan2 December 11 2009, 14:06:29 UTC

You're welcome :D It was a fun piece to write. All that was missing was my little piccy at the end. Like the piccy's I used as scene changes. I just couldn't find one in time for this part. LOL.. though the scene break picture I used in Part 7 was very distracting.. :D

Thanks again for reading and commenting.

seramercury December 11 2009, 11:09:55 UTC

This was an amazing story! You are awesome, I tell you! Awesome! Loved how Dean was teaching Kyle how to play poker. LOL!!

jackfan2 December 11 2009, 14:00:52 UTC

:D Bored!Dean has got to be one of my all time favorite Dean's. He and Kyle just had a great bond, as Dean seems to have with kids in general, and I've always adored that about him. Teaching Kyle poker but not swearing in front of kids... LOL, so his priorities are a wee-bit skewed.

Thanks for hanging in there all the way to the end. I appreciate that more than you know.

adrenalineshots December 12 2009, 01:59:14 UTC

Well, this was a crappy sto-- ah, heck! Who am I kidding?
THIS WAS FRIGGING AWESOME!!! I'm so proud of you, girl! Well done *claps hands*

And I don't wanna hear anything about me this or me that: you wrote this story, you came up with this awesome plot based on nothing but 3 lousy concepts (powersDean, horses and Sam to the rescue) and all those wonderful little moments that made this whole this feel more real, feel like it was about real people with real feelings and real problems, those were all yours.

That was all you, all from your hand. And if I nudged you a little bit here and there? That was just me being shelfish, because I loved this story so much that I could not wait to see it finished.

Now, take a deep breath, shake the cramps off your fingers and dive head-on in to the next one, because they only keep getting better and better :O)

Edited because can't keep my right hand from messing with my left hand even if I put tags on each.... *sigh*

jackfan2 December 12 2009, 04:37:05 UTC

*jaw-drop* The ... next one? Dude, you're such an enabler.

LOL.. and who am I kidding.. I LOVE THAT ABOUT YOU!!!!:D

Man, it's been such an amazing journey since I got into this fandom, and while I started and stopped many an SPN fic (points at my doc file on my laptop) I hadn't finished a single one 'til you came along. And now? An 8 chapter fic... I has much pride, thanks to you. :D

I look forward to finding another one of these unfinished gems and seeing if i can't find my way to the end. Though, I'm sure you'll hafta be there, you know. I kinda think that it means your my muse.

mousme December 12 2009, 10:48:34 UTC

The ... next one? Dude, you're such an enabler.

I would like to cast my vote in firm support of adrenalineshots. You should absolutely be writing more of these. Yes.

jackfan2 December 13 2009, 20:40:54 UTC

Oh geeze.. now I have TWO enablers.

LOL.. next year guys. And that's not really all that far off. I just gotta pick one of the two fics I'd been working on and finish it.

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roque_clasique December 12 2009, 04:44:05 UTC

Great job!
Sorry 'bout the beta thing, thanks so much for understanding -- but CLEARLY you didn't need me. This turned out awesome!
Nicely done, honey.

jackfan2 December 13 2009, 20:39:20 UTC

Hey! Thanks for dropping in!:D

I'm still glad you beta'd the first part. You found much that I'd missed, and your recommendation of finding another beta for the rest over at the hurt!Dean comm was brilliant as well.

Thanks again for your help!