SPN FIC: The Gift (Part 1 of 7)

Sep 05, 2009 15:40

TITLE: The Gift: PART 1
AUTHOR: jackfan2

CATEGORY: Gen
CHARACTERS: Dean, Sam, Castiel
WORDS: 5,562
GENRE: Humor/Hurt/Comfort
RATING: T, or PG13 for swearing
TIMELINE: Season 4
BETAED: roqueclasique, mad_server and the birthday girl herself, adrenalineshots

This is a birthday fic. My good friend and cohort adrenalineshots, aka, Natty, picked the following prompts; Powers!Dean, a horse and Sam to the ( Read more... )

humor, birthday fic, dean, oc, season 4, the gift, h/c, sam, castiel

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adrenalineshots September 14 2009, 03:53:01 UTC
Dude! *blushes* you're embarrassing the crap out of me...
Good thing I had such an huge laugh with this awesome first part!

So many great bits... the part of Dean and his initial reaction to the horse made me flash back to his reaction to flying. Me thinks Dean likes his transportation submissive and, preferably, without a mind of its own.

Then there was the complete 'lost in translation' moment between Dean and Castiel. You guys totally have some very 'weird' expressions that, were it not for the fact that I watch more American movies and series than what is considered healthy, would leave me as confused and totally lost as that poor angel.

And that was, of course, followed by Dean's translation for those in denial *g*

-"“Not long, Dean; you must accomplish your goal quickly. As soon as the family is safe, and the creature-”

“Wendigo”

“- is dispensed.”

“Killed.”LOL ( ... )

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jackfan2 September 15 2009, 17:24:54 UTC
Dude, I'm so very sorry. I didn't put in a warning or any indicator that it was just part one. I've updated the post to include that information 'cuz yea, I know, WIPs ... *ugh* ... just when you're hooked they disappear, unfinished.

Anywho, thanks for taking the time to read and comment. *hugs sick!Dean* Maybe Sam will make him some chicken soup in the next part. Hmmmm.

Yup! Next part in a week-ish.

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roque_clasique September 15 2009, 22:53:39 UTC
Oh, great job on the edits!
Specially that second sentence. Woohoo!
And I love the idea of "underpromising and overdelivering." Fits my philosophy to a T :) 'Cept sometimes I just under-everything :(

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jackfan2 September 17 2009, 03:48:48 UTC
Thanks for reading/suffering through this again!

Again, the effort you gave it was much appreciated and made the week wait so worth it, as I knew it would.

Now, if my mojo would just cooperate. Otherwise, my attempt at under-promising might just flip to the 'over' category. Soooo close to the end. Sooooooo close.

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seramercury November 29 2009, 17:11:17 UTC
This is just pure awesomeness and I can't wait to read the next part. Love your characterization and the banter between Dean and Cas. And, of course, Dean's relationship with Satan's Spawn. LMAO!! :D

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jackfan2 November 30 2009, 06:26:41 UTC
Thanks! So very glad you kept at it after I got the links to work. I truly appreciate the feedback and it makes me happy you're enjoying the banter and the horse!

Thanks for reading.

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