Comments | jack_built: Growing Pains (Part 3)

agriope23 in jack_built

Growing Pains (Part 3)

Oct 22, 2007 03:04

And here's the last bit.

Title: Growing Pains (Part 3)
Summary: He just has to say the right thing.

When he emerges from his room, a black cloud hanging over him, Cam knows to nettle him a little less. Vala, on the other hand, does her best to annoy him. And John in turn, tries to keep swearwords down to a minimum. He generally doesn’t succeed.

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john sheppard, fic

Comments 9

2bluaeryn October 22 2007, 10:55:06 UTC

Thanks so much for this...sigh, I REALLLLLLY needed this!!!
Wonderful story,so liked the ending. Thanks again for sharing this 8-)

agriope23 October 22 2007, 20:34:18 UTC

So glad I could deliver :) I was wondering actually if you'd beta the next installment?

2bluaeryn October 23 2007, 06:22:38 UTC

I would consider it an honor. Thanks for thinking of me!!!
You can em me here:
bluaeryn@sbcglobal.net

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agriope23 October 22 2007, 20:35:00 UTC

Thank you. I love that things can end sweetly in this AU. No blood-sucking aliens or evil repilcators on the horizon...

seldearslj October 23 2007, 06:22:30 UTC

Heh. Love the flow and current of it, like floating in liquid language.

Good work!

agriope23 October 31 2007, 22:32:45 UTC

Liquid language

I'll store that one away in my "best feedback" box. Thank you!

dknightshade November 1 2007, 01:30:15 UTC

Sweet. I like how comfortable they are in the end. Even if it is undefined.

agriope23 November 13 2007, 19:15:14 UTC

Thank you. I like undefined, it leaves room for sequels, especially in this comm.

maniacalshen January 15 2011, 19:14:34 UTC

Love it. They're just a little bit broken and completely adorable.