This story makes me all kinds of excited. I love the way you take aspects of the story and twist them. Like Shelly's party for instance. She got tough after it and I love that she did in the story as well except for a different reason. *sigh* I've got all kinds of butterflies and what not now.
Great chapter and I love how you tied it all together and Veronica thought Logan's Dad stopped beating him. She never would have planted the bong if she thought Aaron would beat Logan for it so it completely made sense that Logan told her otherwise! Can't wait for more :)
That was exactly it. I really wanted to keep the bong/headlights parts in, but she would never do that if she thought it would get Logan hurt, and...the rest pretty much wrote itself. :-) And coming from someone who's been posting such fabulous things lately just makes it extra special--thanks for commenting! :-)
Thanks! My current one is angsty (someone stole my smut bunny!) but I hope to have it done sometime soon and I have another story that's mentally percolating but I'm desperately wanting to read Logan's reaction to Troy, Troy being interested in Veronica and Duncan possibly being okay with it...the possibilities in just those scenes make me grin since Logan is NOT going to be happy at that point! :) Hee.
I just read the whole series straight through and really loved it. This is a really ambitious idea to tackle, but you do it very realistically. Can't wait to read more! (also, the link to your ch 4 is broken, just so you know!)
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And thanks for the info on the link--I learned how to do the links recently and I keep having to ::cough:: fix things. :-)
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