OMG! I think that's how I started my comment in the last chapter! This chapter...I don't know if there's words. It was freakin awesome! It made me cry...a couple of times. I love the doctor. I love Veronica and Logan and Keith and Wallace and Mac! And Aaron is going to jail! Veronica took him down! And I liked that Duncan wasn't mentioned until the end.
This was amazing! I can't believe there's only 2 chapters left. You are doing season 2 also..right?? :) I love this fic! Wonderfully amazing job!!! And have a great new year!
Aw, thank you! :-) Mercedes says I must apologize for making you cry...so sorry. *laughs very gently* :-) It's a compliment to an author any time a reaader is affectedthat strongly.
Wasn't the doctor awesome? I've had his cameo planned forever. It was really weird, it was like this guy insisted out of nowhere on being in the story. Well, okay. *laughs*
When Mercedes was beta'ing, she forgot all about Duncan until he made his reappearance at the end. He's such a nutball.
Sadly, no season 2. This is it! Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback. Happy New Year to you! :-)
I'm glad Veronica didn't let Haaron into Logan's hospital room and that Logan didn't resent her for trying to take down his father. I also loved that Logan was being a good wittle boy because he wanted to live with Veronica and Keith instead of go home! My poor woobie!! *huggles him* Loved the bit about Mac's childhood friend and her research into child abuse and Wallace calling all of Logan's friends over to stop by, etc...needless to say, I loved this chapter :)
I am still crying. The doctor and then Mac's best friend... it's just so SAD. Child abuse is just so wrong, and the good doctor was right, if one stupid doctor would have helped him things could have been different.
I LOVE THAT MADISON SLEPT WITH HIM BEFORE LILLY!
Lianne makes me angry that's all I'll say about her.
Awww...Mercedes says I must apologize for making you cry. It's incredibly meaningful to an author to make someone feel that strongly, so thank you for sharing. :-)
Not that I have strong feelings about the evil that is child abuse, of course... And I just get angrier when famous people or what have you get away with because of their fame. ::cough::
And HA! on Madison!!!
I hate Lianne. Just sayin'. :-)
Thanks so much for commenting!! Happy New Year :-)
So I wanted to squee at this being posted, but someone told me I couldn't.
I also have to say that my iTunes was being ev0l tonight while I read. I had some rather painful moments of Logan in the hospital to "Boys Don't Cry", especially the one where V was yelling at Aaron.
I had "The Widow" by The Mars Volta play during that dream with Lilly and Logan and Aaron, and and then "Hurt" and some other rather emo songs of various sorts.
I adored that Wallace called everyone to visit Logan and that everyone was trying to be helpful about the whole situation.
The little touches about Mac and her friend helped to set up the fall of Aaron so nicely.
Lianne at the door is a nice little cliffhanger, as is the part about Donut being empty and alone when LV aren't talking about them.
Nicely done, and good luck on the last two chapters. I'm going to be sad to see this end.
OH man! two parts? I loved this! I loved Dr. Lake! :) I almost cried at the ER scene...Aaron got his...yay! Poor Duncan, feeling neglected...what a freak! lol...and the ending..wasn't expecting that! Can't wait to read more!
Didn't you love Dr. Lake? I just want to give him a big ole' hug. :-) And it was SUCH a pleasure to bring Aaron down--*very* satisfying! And Duncan...I do believe that my mother would refer to him as a "nutball". Whacko.
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This was amazing! I can't believe there's only 2 chapters left. You are doing season 2 also..right?? :) I love this fic! Wonderfully amazing job!!! And have a great new year!
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Wasn't the doctor awesome? I've had his cameo planned forever. It was really weird, it was like this guy insisted out of nowhere on being in the story. Well, okay. *laughs*
When Mercedes was beta'ing, she forgot all about Duncan until he made his reappearance at the end. He's such a nutball.
Sadly, no season 2. This is it! Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback. Happy New Year to you! :-)
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And aw, Logan, my sweet woobie! (And I adore the word "huggle"!!!) The back story w/Mac I hadn't planned, but it came organically, so yay!
So glad you liked it and thanks for sharing!! Happy New Year. :-)
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it's just so SAD. Child abuse is just so wrong, and the good doctor was right, if one stupid doctor would have helped him things could have been different.
I LOVE THAT MADISON SLEPT WITH HIM
BEFORE LILLY!
Lianne makes me angry that's all I'll say about her.
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Not that I have strong feelings about the evil that is child abuse, of course... And I just get angrier when famous people or what have you get away with because of their fame. ::cough::
And HA! on Madison!!!
I hate Lianne. Just sayin'. :-)
Thanks so much for commenting!! Happy New Year :-)
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I also have to say that my iTunes was being ev0l tonight while I read. I had some rather painful moments of Logan in the hospital to "Boys Don't Cry", especially the one where V was yelling at Aaron.
I had "The Widow" by The Mars Volta play during that dream with Lilly and Logan and Aaron, and and then "Hurt" and some other rather emo songs of various sorts.
I adored that Wallace called everyone to visit Logan and that everyone was trying to be helpful about the whole situation.
The little touches about Mac and her friend helped to set up the fall of Aaron so nicely.
Lianne at the door is a nice little cliffhanger, as is the part about Donut being empty and alone when LV aren't talking about them.
Nicely done, and good luck on the last two chapters. I'm going to be sad to see this end.
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You just had the soundtrack of doom, didn't you? Frighteningly appropriate. Ack!
I love Wallace. He's too cool. I hadn't originally planned the back story for Mac, but it insisted on being written--so glad it did. :-)
So glad you liked and thanks so much for commenting! And there is much intensity to come--hang on for the roller coaster. :-)
Happy New Year, Roz!
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Happy New Year to you, too, Jada!
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Thanks for commenting and Happy New Year!!
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