New Fic!

[j_daisy]

...But first - why you should be watching Scrubs: http://youtube.com/watch?v=jo-E6NEsLqE "You better have a reason for stealing my man's badonka donk donk."

And here's a new oneshot!

Title: Extra-Sensory Perception
Disclaimer: I don't own anything!
Notes: There is nothing in

Comments

[anonymous]

I love your writing style, hon! I also love that you have Wilson losing his sight. It allows those other senses to pick up, and you expressed that beautifully. :D *HUGS*

[tiflissa]

*facepalm* That was me.

[j_daisy]

Thank you! See, it's a good thing that you didn't wind up beta-ing this because otherwise I would have spent the past couple days constantly emailing you and being anxious on you, and generally being a needy, clingy fic-writer. LOL. Now you just see the good parts of the story, and not the ugly process. :)

[tiflissa]

Hey, I can empathize with that! I agonize over the placement of every single word. I can deal with writers being anxious on me - since I understand the feeling! *LOL*

Either way, I love your writing, so keep it up, sweetie! :D

[phinnia]

This is beautiful: I adore House/Wilson/Cuddy fics, and I love your style, it's fantastic. The old eskimo woman comment is classic House (and I love Wilson and Cuddy's little chat.) :-) Nice.

[j_daisy]

Thank you so much! The line was originally "old Asian woman" but I liked Eskimo better. Acute Angle Glaucoma can occur in both, so the joke was in the medicine. :)

[angelfirenze]

This read a little clunkily in the beginning, but the entire project is lovely. Very descriptive, as far as Wilson's other senses and how he uses them to identify those around him is very richly done and I enjoyed it a great deal. I imagine the tangle is a bit more complicated since Wilson can't see what anyone is doing, but you explained the three of them together so perfectly. *sighs contentedly*

[j_daisy]

Thank you! I agree that the beginning was a little awkward - it was exposition, and there's really now way around it. And the "tangle" - heh - notice how I cleverly avoided getting *too* descriptive. It's really just groping, but I imagine that there would be awkward moments of confusion for him. LOL.

Thank you for your review and for your honesty. :)

[shikabane_mai]

I love this fic, especially the tone and writing style.

The ending, with House and Cuddy following him, was the sweetest ending ever! Your fics are amazing! :)

[j_daisy]

You are so sweet to me! Initially, I was worried that the ending was too subtle and it would fall flat, but the alternate wording I had was way too saccharine and what I have is growing on me. :)

[wasabi_girl1]

Wow, I really liked it. I just...wow. Especially the last line. *loves*

[j_daisy]

The last line was my biggest insecurity, so thank you! I have so much appreciation for you taking the time to review and tell me you enjoyed this. :)