i wait, this could die.. i want you...

Aug 25, 2004 08:32



in the workings of my life

surrounded, immersed
daisies scattered
so cheerful, incredibly bright

anyone else's eyes
would catch the impurities
imperfect petals, torn and drooping

there is only brilliant light

"you can't hold her"

it was only then
you opened your eyes to me
i can't hold the fire

la poésie, this awkward life, missing feelings

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in these eyes........... anonymous August 25 2004, 15:20:46 UTC
time is not permitting,
in these eyes, you are mine
schedules working against me
in your heart, am i yours?

{i'll let the chorus of our hearts, sing the rest}

...what a lovely melody indeed

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in the cavities of my torso, it lies.. it shakes!! anonymous August 26 2004, 09:11:51 UTC
precious
i care for you so much
afraid
i would hurt you so much

{you know you are a ..cute little heartbreaker} ?

those big hands holding my fragile heart

it doesn't want to be so fragile
it wonders if it should be held

held so tightly

it has been held before
and things have gone so wrong
inside crushing grips

this would be softer, this i know

but i can't tell it to wait and see!
i dont know what i want

..which is in control,

the heart or the mind?

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