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Pieces of a Puzzle 1/2

Apr 28, 2010 12:04

Title: Pieces of a Puzzle 1/2 ( Read more... )

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on_a_halfshell April 28 2010, 19:30:27 UTC

Thanks for letting me know you want to read it! Tbh, I don't like to read Wip's either. This is complete and I will post the final part within the next couple of days.

I hope you enjoy it,

Shell

caelith April 28 2010, 23:07:11 UTC

Uh oh, Jared has some competition there.

Love this so far, can't wait for the next part.

on_a_halfshell April 30 2010, 05:42:15 UTC

I just posted it... I hope you like it!

billysgirl5 April 29 2010, 01:46:24 UTC

This was great! I'm looking forward to reading the final part.

on_a_halfshell April 30 2010, 05:43:52 UTC

Thank you so much. It's nice to know that someone is reading it :)

iniq April 29 2010, 07:06:38 UTC

Oh, this is a great beginning! Can't wait to see how you continue the story. Love how detailed you write the story - and the dialogs and characterizations. :)

on_a_halfshell April 30 2010, 05:46:47 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you like it. I'm really new to writing so your words are very reassuring. I'm really hoping for feedback once people have read the entire story.

Shell

nayrep April 29 2010, 20:39:58 UTC

really looking forward to seeing the rest of this!

on_a_halfshell April 30 2010, 05:47:39 UTC

Thanks for the comment and for reading my little story! I just posted the second and final part...:)