Mudslide (Team Angst): "Excavation"

[izhilzha]

Sorry this is a little bit late, you guys!

Title: Excavation
Author: izhilzha
Pairing/Characters: David Sinclair, Colby Granger
Rating/Category: PG-13/Gen
Spoilers: "Trust Metric," oblique references to "When Worlds Collide"
Summary: God save idiots like my partner.

Comments

[spikedluv]

Oh man, that was really fantastic! Loved David's pov, and his certainty that he's going to save Colby. The last line was perfect. *g*

(Awesome job with this prompt; I know it was a tough one. *g*)

[izhilzha]

Glad you liked it! David is much tougher to write than I thought he'd be, but I did have some fun with this one. Despite the evil, evil prompt. :-)

[jelsemium]

GAHHHHH!!!

Poor Colby! You must write a sequel where you dig him out!

Oh, no! Don and Newbie! No killing the Newbie (or Don). They did that on CSI: Miami.

This is an excellent story. I love the David POV (not enough David stories out there.) And I really admire how you captured the feel of climbing through the mountains and getting caught in a mudslide. (Been in the mountains in the rain, never in a mudslide, knock on wood.)

Curse you, I shall have to give this a high rating! (Kidding) ((About the cursing, I mean. Not the high rating.))

[izhilzha]

Hee! Oh, Colby's fine, I'm sure. Not that David's really all that sure himself, no matter how hard he's trying to be positive. *smooshes David* (Sheesh, I think I'm going to be writing angst all summer.) I really should try writing David again sometime. I like him.

I got a kick out of referencing the rookie, even though I'm leery of what she'll actually be like when she shows up.

Well, I gave your story a high rating also, so maybe we'll even each other out. *g*

[jelsemium]

Just dropping by to see if there's a sequel to this that I missed.

So? Is there a sequel? Did you smoosh the Newbie? I know that Nikki has made a few enemies in this fandom, so she might not survive this.

?? Inquiring Minds Want to Know ??

[izhilzha]

Aw, no sequel yet, thought I'm amused you remembered. :) And I kinda like Nikki now that I've met her, so I probably wouldn't squoosh her.

I'm bad at writing sequels, just so you know.

[elysium1996]

nicely done.

[izhilzha]

Thank you!

[feliciakw]

Ah, I see you got it done. Good on ya!

Now, no more ficathons until you finish the fandom script (and visions!Dean). :-)

[izhilzha]

Yes'm, no more ficathons. *g*

(Hey, would you be free to chat a bit today? You could help me brainstorm CSI stuff or stuff for the fandom script....)

[izhilzha]

Thank you so much! Yeah, I thought it'd be fun to write some David and Colby, and now I want to write *more*. Hmmm. The boys, they are addicting.