[OneShot] Mistress

[izanamiwiles]

Title: Mistress [OneShot]
Pairings: Changmin/OC
Rating: R (het smut)
Genre: slight angst (possible rape)
Summary: She's the mistress, and he's the servant she bought....

"Mistress"What?" seemingly angry, the young lady turned to face him, displaying no signs of the effect he had on her

Comments

[lady_monochrome]

Hey, it's not a fail~ Bastard Min is always a fun read >3 Still I feel a little sorry for her. I had the feeling she would be the dominatrix here but you turned that right around xP

As I read it almost felt like I was reading a manga. It had that kind of feeling. The only thing that bothered me was the inconclusive plot. With everything in Changmin's head being left in the air and all. But it' smut right? XD Not everyone would care.

[izanamiwiles]

OMG Where were you??? I've been checking your account to see any updates on my favorite fic of yours but no sign of anything....T__T I missed you a looooooooooooooooot!
But thank you SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH for taking the time to read and comment on my poor atempt to write smut.

I'm happy I was able to keep a "sort" of suspens about her, but it's very true that I should have given more details about Changmin's thoughts. However truthfully I wrote this as a little extract of a story, which is why I didn't give that much info. But THANK YOU REALLY for giving me your thoughts and feelings about it. It helps me a lot and it's extremmely important and interesting, so really THANK YOU <33333333333333

[lady_monochrome]

Hahahahahahaha I'm so sorry *bows* And I'm even more sorry for answering so late. I'm so lazy sometimes

[toni_luv]

Failed, this no no. Not a failure. It's pretty interesting reading this. With their little eye games going on between them. Changmin is more happy in this house, except he always dreams of freedom life instead of being stuck in this rank of slavery. So he decides this now to escape with the money to buy himself out. Mistress made the first move on him when he hovered over her. Cant complain at that..who wouldn't kiss Changmin? Well at least Changmin was gentle at the beginning until getting to the middle part where the girl loses herself from her brain... congratulations..the character and author both lost their cherry by one guy! *claps* Gosh, Changmin you took two virginity's in one shot. You the man!

[izanamiwiles]

Aww THank you for reading and writing me such a nice comment. <3

hahahah right? who wouldn't kiss Changmin? ^^ But it's true that they both loose playing at this game.
And Changmin is indeed the man shooting two birds with one stone ^^

Very glad you took the time to read this and to comment and again thank you so much for leaving me such a long one.
*showers you with Changmin chocolate chip cookies*
*makes Yoochun deliver you Yunho tied up in a big bow*
*hugs*
=^^=

[miri91]

8D haha you're right, who NEEDS five sets of ridiculous forks in varying sizes just to show people 'hey, i know which onesto use to eat!" T___T *changmin uses them as dart practice fo yo head* lol

and i liked the bit about the rays shyly peaking through teh windows~ awwwww

glad you posted this in the end, was actually wondering if there was more ^^* but this def was an interesting take....instead of both of them wanting it, one wanted it more than the other and the other didnt want to give it up (again, i sympathize with her)

heeeee bisous! <33333s

[izanamiwiles]

hahahahaah *avoids the dart from changmin's fork weapon*
but true ultimately we really don't need it, but coming from a country that produces them and uses them a lot during dinner parties I'm use to them. XDDD
I'm pondering on the idea of a sequel, but don't really have anything in mind right now, so maybe later.......we'll see. ^^

I too sympathize with her, but at the same time she was also playing a dangerous game from the start...
*ENORMOUS BEAR HUGSSSSSSSS*
*Love you* =^^=

[miri91]

x'D cm's fork weapon....ohh god
:T id forgotten about that. yes its proper etiquette but if you really think about it, it's like 'its just food, either way it goes down into the same stomach no matter how i eat it'
haha
>< hope you come up with an idea for a sequel soon! meanwhile...ive got to come up with continuations to the updates i left hanging in the air for months :'''D

*tackle hugs you* il nevah lechu goooo 8D

[changline]

Hey hey Iz...not bad for your first attempt in smut...
I agree with [info]lady_monochrome in the thought that the mistress might be the dominant one...anyway, I like the feel of the fighting thing? omg , my perverted mind is running haywire again...lol
The ending was sort of a cliffhanger though...anyway, I enjoyed it...^^
Good job...^^
<3