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Week 161 - Non Canon Pairings

Oct 06, 2008 23:19

Title: License to Kill
Author: Langus
Rating: 14A
Word Count: 1760
Pairing: Kikyou and Oniguomo
Summary: Give it a chance, it's not what you think.

( License to Kill )

langus, #161 non-canon pairings

Comments 5

snow_fall October 8 2008, 00:41:28 UTC

I liked your treatment of the end. He had lost before he'd even gained a body and only discovered it at the last moment. It was perfect. Well done.

guelphite1 October 8 2008, 05:15:42 UTC

Thank you :) I thought, if anything, realizing after the fact that she already belonged to another would've been enough to taint any lasting bit of affection he had for her forever. Glad you enjoyed!

landofthekwt October 8 2008, 12:38:40 UTC

Nice treatment of this story. You can see the genesis of Naraku's fatal flaw in your story. The one thing he wishes for is the one thing he can never have: Kikyo's heart.

landofthekwt October 8 2008, 23:01:37 UTC

Exactly :) You almost (almost) want to feel sorry for him. Thanks for taking the time to read and review!

Congratulations! ktshabatie January 16 2009, 06:34:35 UTC

Congratulations Langus - your story License to Kill has been nominated for Best Canon at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008 ( ... )