Comments | iy_no_kakera: Set 1: 62 雪が舞う Snow Dances ~ Sess/Kagura

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Set 1: 62 雪が舞う Snow Dances ~ Sess/Kagura

Apr 09, 2005 19:00

Title: Dance Like Snow
Theme: Set 1: #62 Snow Dances
Genres: Romance?
Pairings: Kagura/Sesshoumaru
Word Count: 141
Rating: PG-13 **Sex is implied**
Summary: Snow falls and melts together... This is sort of a poetic, abstract drabble. It's supposed to make some sense, but not a lot. But please let me know if you like it or not and pull it apart ( Read more... )

set #1 theme #062: 雪が舞う snow dances, claim: sesshoumaru/kagura, rating: t, author: nyethebandgeek

Comments 4

abarero April 13 2005, 01:05:34 UTC

Very good doing an abstract piece, I was curious as to what those 'papers' Sesshoumaru held were and whether that dictated it as an AU piece or an AR, but it's still very nice ^^

nyethebandgeek April 18 2005, 06:19:47 UTC

Ah. Thank you. It's more of an AR. (I believe that's what I'm thinking ~_^) The papers where just stuff. They weren't too important. Maybe battle plans? Thank you again for the review. XD

alf_b April 17 2005, 07:26:18 UTC

Cool fic :) The two snowflakes represent Kagura and Sesshoumaru, and their desire for one another.

I was thrown off by your choice of the word "one" in the line, "She steps away from the window and finds the one with the golden eyes..." at first, but after re-reading it, it made more sense.

Otherwise, very good :) Fits the theme title very well.

nyethebandgeek April 18 2005, 06:21:39 UTC

Ah, ok. Thank you for your review and your comment about that line. XD