Comments | iy_no_kakera: Rin/Kohaku Set #2- Theme 1: Start

ypaladinofchaos in iy_no_kakera

Rin/Kohaku Set #2- Theme 1: Start

Dec 14, 2005 22:55

Title: Start

Theme: Set #2- Theme 1: Start

Genres: General

Pairings: Rin x Kohaku (can be taken as platonic or romantic)

Rating: PG

Word Count: 318

( At the start... )

author: ypaladinofchaos, claim: kohaku/rin, set #2 theme #001: はじまり start, rating: k+

Comments 2

aiffe December 29 2005, 18:06:16 UTC

There's something dark in the lightness of this; I picture Kohaku eating Rin's watermelon with the taste of gravesoil still in his mouth. A salvation for the unsalvageable, so to speak. Very nice. Of course it's the ambiguous sexuality in innocent acts that does it for me. I like seeing dark!fic that doesn't have a giant neon sign reading "I AM A FREAKIN' DARKFIC" once in a while, you know? Subtlety is good.

*nudges own "I AM A FREAKIN' DARKFIC" sign under the bed and whistles*

ypaladinofchaos December 29 2005, 22:39:40 UTC

I felt it was edging on the Darkfic! border, but ambiguous sexuality?

*checks back*

Well I'll be... must have written those parts in when I wasn't thinking.

The watermelon vs gravesoil is the basic light/life vs dark/death idea of the story. I felt it was a nice analogy.

Thanks for the comment!