#10 - Determination

[hedda_1]

Title: Onigumo
Author: Hedda
Word Count: 11 (!)
Prompt: Determination - Cinquain
Genre: Dark, poetry
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Characters: Onigumo/Naraku
Summary: I absolutely refuse to give a summary for a poem that consists of eleven words... XD
A/N: This was fun and I shall return to this form. Especially since I wrote 10 cinquains, until I was satisfied

Comments

[hairann]

Absolutely amazing! Though I would love to see what the other 9 looked like as well since we already know you are too hard on yourself when it comes to your poetry :P.

One thing though, and it's nothing super important, but on the summary. I can completely understand not wanting to add one for a 11 word entry, but I do add them onto the winner banners, at the bottom, and would hate to leave yours blank when you place.

So just something simple like 'Onigumo's determination' like I did with mine 'Bankotsu's Determination' would at least give me something to write there. Though if you really don't want it, just let me know and I will skip it when this one gets a banner :).

Either way, great poem and I am seriously going to have to bring this type back at some point, they are really fun hehe.

[hedda_1]

Since I cannot change my entry anymore, this shall be the new summary then.

Summary: Onigumo's transition.

Sorry, I total forgot about that aspect.

And glad you liked it. =)

[hairann]

Hehe no worries and I like that summary; very much sums things up perfectly :).