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Entry: Kiss

Feb 25, 2009 07:46

Title: His Reward
Rating: K+
Genre: Romance
Warnings: None
Word Count: 972
Pairing/Characters: Sango/Miroku, Kagome
Author: yumi-michiyo
Summary: Miroku gets a special reward for saving Sango.

( His Reward )

!entry post, ~february 2009, yumi_michiyo

Comments 2

dr_abraxas February 27 2009, 02:09:21 UTC

this is such fluff, i'm going to say Max found a few seconds to write it.

caitriona695 March 10 2009, 18:50:09 UTC

This is nicely written. The best part is that the author didn't have to resort to Miroku "groping" as a plot point.

As far as the characters are concerned, I think that the author did well. We've seen time and again that despite his own wounds, Miroku concern for Sango outweighs self preservation. Also, this author does a nice job of portraying the shyness of Sango when it comes to things physical.